ideas for sequel

[geraldf]

I'm thinking about writing a sequel to a story I posted awlhile back. The title of the story is RHONDA'S TOUCH. I think I know which direction I'd like the new story to go, but I'd like to hear some other ideas. I'm computer challenged, so I'm not quite sure how to get you there from here, but it's in the First Time section. I'd really love to hear some feedback on the original story and some new ideas for the sepuel. Thanks.

Geraldf

 

[Fantasies-only]

I'm thinking about writing a sequel to a story I posted awlhile back. The title of the story is RHONDA'S TOUCH. I think I know which direction I'd like the new story to go, but I'd like to hear some other ideas. I'm computer challenged, so I'm not quite sure how to get you there from here, but it's in the First Time section. I'd really love to hear some feedback on the original story and some new ideas for the sepuel. Thanks.

Geraldf

http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=89303
Please PM me.

 

[hyulhyulhyul]

I'm thinking about writing a sequel to a story I posted awlhile back. The title of the story is RHONDA'S TOUCH. I think I know which direction I'd like the new story to go, but I'd like to hear some other ideas. I'm computer challenged, so I'm not quite sure how to get you there from here, but it's in the First Time section. I'd really love to hear some feedback on the original story and some new ideas for the sepuel. Thanks.

Geraldf

I'd be more inclined to suggest a continuation rather than a sequel. It doesn't seem quite long enough for the word sequel to apply. I liked it. I hope you do something with it.

Maybe he becomes a regular and they form a friendship. When she goes to California, maybe things don't work out for her. When she comes back, they reconnect and things develope from there.

 

[geraldf]

Yes, continuation is probably the better term even though I thiink the story is allright standing alone. You're advice is actually sort of the direction I'm going in. I'm sort of thinking that maybe she does have a little success, but she can't get Brad out of her mind so on a visit back to NY she goes looking for him.

 

[WhiteTigerNipples]

Yes, continuation is probably the better term even though I thiink the story is allright standing alone. You're advice is actually sort of the direction I'm going in. I'm sort of thinking that maybe she does have a little success, but she can't get Brad out of her mind so on a visit back to NY she goes looking for him.

Sounds good.