Ideas for future lesbian stories?

[Smokey125]

Greetings, friends, Smokey125 here. I've just a couple days ago published my seventy-somethingth submission, and am still always looking for new potential storylines and ideas, as well as interactions with fellow Lit users and Readers. If you're unfamiliar with my work—which is probably the case —I used to write both hetero and lesbian stories, but am only writing lesberotica at this point. The link to my stories is found in my signature, so if you've read any of my stuff or do so after this and/or have any girl-girl story ideas to possibly toss into the air for me, please do drop a line. I always enjoy hearing from and communicating with Readers. Thanks! —Smoke

 

[hfernandez1983]

hey Smokey,

I havent read any of your work but I will definitely check it out. I do have ideas around certain storylines but first need to see what all you are comfortable writing first.

 

[Smokey125]

hfernandez1983

Hey there hf83, thanks for your reply. As a supplement to the last post, I should add that some of my stories involve BDSM and are rougher and edgier, while others do not and are not. So depending on your personal tastes, hopefully you can find something there to give you a good experience. Cheers, and happy reading!

 

[hfernandez1983]

hows this for an idea.

Riley is a 28 year old successful business woman. She has seen tough times since childhood and had an abusive father. Breaking out of her past she has created a big name of herself in the business world. But because of her work, her relationships have always had to suffer. Her relationship with other women often only last a short while.

She feels lonely and unloved. So she orders a mail order bride. Take your pick of any country. Once her mail order bride arrives, she makes her accustomed to her BDSM lifestyle and tells her what would be required of her. She only uses the bride to satisfy her sexual urges. But the mail order bride slowly starts to break down her walls for the real Riley to come out. They fall in love bla bla bla.....

Sounds a little Christian Grey, but doesnt have to be. This has many possibilities. It can go many different ways.

 

[Smokey125]

hfernandez1983 II

All right, good opening. Must admit I've never heard of a woman ordering a mail-order bride, that's certainly original. Great thing about stories is they can start with pretty much any premise you come up with, then see how the elements play out.

If you wanna PM me or go to my profile and drop me a feedback line, you can do that and we can discuss it further one of those ways. Or if you prefer to keep posting on this thread, that's just as well too. Thanks again!

 

[LairOfTheCougar]

I quite enjoyed your Hypno Rapist series https://www.literotica.com/s/hypnothe-rapist

While the story line itself is strictly hetero, it wouldn't be difficult to take it in a sapphic direction. My idea is that Dr. Angela Starr's assistant, Paula, is entirely aware of the good Doctor's activities with her patients and has been surreptitiously recording the illicit going's on. Paula confronts Angela with the evidence and a simple proposition. Angela can be her obedient fuck slut, beginning right now, or Paula can take her evidence to the police.

Angela has no choice but to comply with Paula's demands. Wonderfully forced lesbilarity ensues.

 

[Smokey125]

LairOfTheCougar

I quite enjoyed your Hypno Rapist series https://www.literotica.com/s/hypnothe-rapist

While the story line itself is strictly hetero, it wouldn't be difficult to take it in a sapphic direction. My idea is that Dr. Angela Starr's assistant, Paula, is entirely aware of the good Doctor's activities with her patients and has been surreptitiously recording the illicit going's on. Paula confronts Angela with the evidence and a simple proposition. Angela can be her obedient fuck slut, beginning right now, or Paula can take her evidence to the police.

Angela has no choice but to comply with Paula's demands. Wonderfully forced lesbilarity ensues.

Well, thank you, LotC, I'm glad you enjoyed them. They were rather self-healing and almost even a little therapeutic for me to write, and I'm very happy and gratified they've received positive feedback overall. Unfortunately, there's a problem with Angie and Paula together in a lesbian tryst. The problem is that both are straight, and that Paula is married, to a gentleman named Dave Saunders. He's referenced in part 6.
Of course, nothing says that aNOTHER therapist can't be created, a gay one whose recep or assistant or even boss coerces her into something naughty. The question is, would this therapist also be sexually seducing her patients, thereby enabling the other woman to effectively blackmail her, or should she and Angie be differentiated?
I WAS thinking of making a lesbian version of another hetero story of mine, a story called "Once Upon A Time Warp," but I'm not sure how well it would work. Thanks for replying to the post, sir! Looking forward to hearing more of what you think!

 

[LincolnDuncan]

A smart, beautiful, wealthy business woman losses out on a deal to a male competitor who she has never met but she has proof that he did something highly unethical and illegal to secure the deal. Our lady is also a dominant lesbian who is quite accomplished in seducing other women and getting the to do as she wants. In an act of revenge she sets out to seduce and steal the male competitors wife. Being very wealthy she can afford to have private investigators do a deep search into the married woman's past. Of particular interest would be if she has exhibited and lesbian behavior in her life. Also of interest would be her relationship with her mother and other influential females in her life.

 

[Smokey125]

LincolnDuncan

A smart, beautiful, wealthy business woman losses out on a deal to a male competitor who she has never met but she has proof that he did something highly unethical and illegal to secure the deal. Our lady is also a dominant lesbian who is quite accomplished in seducing other women and getting the to do as she wants. In an act of revenge she sets out to seduce and steal the male competitors wife. Being very wealthy she can afford to have private investigators do a deep search into the married woman's past. Of particular interest would be if she has exhibited and lesbian behavior in her life. Also of interest would be her relationship with her mother and other influential females in her life.

Hey again LD, another intriguing idea, but probably suited better to another author than myself. I'm aware there are those who would question, debunk or perhaps even be offended by this pattern, but all the main and semi-main male characters in my stories are pretty good, virtuous folks. Basically, I tend to leave the underhanded, sneaky and malicious behavior to the ladies, 'cause I find that dynamic more interesting and unique (and relieving). I would be of the opinion that there are already way too many unsavory fictitious male characters everywhere out there and that we don't need any more. Doesn't make us look that great as a gender. But now, were this another lesbian or FEmale bisexual co-worker of hers on whom she takes revenge, then yeah, I say sure, that'd land in my wheelhouse.

 

[Smokey125]

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[LincolnDuncan]

Hey again LD, another intriguing idea, but probably suited better to another author than myself. I'm aware there are those who would question, debunk or perhaps even be offended by this pattern, but all the main and semi-main male characters in my stories are pretty good, virtuous folks. Basically, I tend to leave the underhanded, sneaky and malicious behavior to the ladies, 'cause I find that dynamic more interesting and unique (and relieving). I would be of the opinion that there are already way too many unsavory fictitious male characters everywhere out there and that we don't need any more. Doesn't make us look that great as a gender. But now, were this another lesbian or FEmale bisexual co-worker of hers on whom she takes revenge, then yeah, I say sure, that'd land in my wheelhouse.

I wasn't thinking of the guy as a major character. He is just there to do something unethical and illegal so that our woman would be motivated to steal his wife. Also, I was thinking that the revenge factor takes a backseat when there is chemistry between the women.

 

[Smokey125]

L.d. 2

Okay, well, we can chew on it and see how it tastes eventually (I know, that's what she said, I know). In the meantime, there's the other idea you gave me before and the couple other ones users on this thread have given me, so that should be keeping me busy for a little while. But feel free to keep posting on this thread if you like, I don't think the thread should be going anywhere. Cheers! —Smoke

 

[LairOfTheCougar]

Well, thank you, LotC, I'm glad you enjoyed them. They were rather self-healing and almost even a little therapeutic for me to write, and I'm very happy and gratified they've received positive feedback overall. Unfortunately, there's a problem with Angie and Paula together in a lesbian tryst. The problem is that both are straight, and that Paula is married, to a gentleman named Dave Saunders. He's referenced in part 6.
Of course, nothing says that aNOTHER therapist can't be created, a gay one whose recep or assistant or even boss coerces her into something naughty. The question is, would this therapist also be sexually seducing her patients, thereby enabling the other woman to effectively blackmail her, or should she and Angie be differentiated?
I WAS thinking of making a lesbian version of another hetero story of mine, a story called "Once Upon A Time Warp," but I'm not sure how well it would work. Thanks for replying to the post, sir! Looking forward to hearing more of what you think!

Sorry I missed the bit about Paula being married. I do have perhaps a bad habit of skimming until the fucking starts. Oh well.

That's what the Good Lord gave us retconns for.

For me a big part of the appeal is that Angela IS straight and she is forced into a sexual situation with Paula, or whoever. Paula could secretly be a sadistic domme. She has become bored with pegging her husband and thinks it would be fun to force Angela to her will, to dominate, abuse and humiliate her. Angela has no choice to submit. At first she is repulsed and ashamed by the things Paula forces her to do. Her shame only increases when she begins to enjoy it.


OR
This just occurred to me, create a new therapist, Susan. Susan is doing the same thing Angela is, taking advantage of her hypnotized patients, except Susan makes no pretenses as to what she is doing.
She is raping patients and enjoys doing it.

Enter Susan's new assistant, Barbara a capable, competent woman ih her late forties or early fifties. She asks no questions about Susan's peculiar arrangements for appointments and is an absolute whizz with technology. All seems perfect until Barbara shows Susan the video she made of Susan having her way with patients.

Turns out, one of Susan's early victims was Barbara's son. Now Barbara wants revenge and she will have it. Either by sending Susan to prison, or by her own hand. She will do to Susan what Susan did to her son.

Maybe a tad darker than you were thinking of, but they appeal to me.

 

[Smokey125]

LotC II

Hey, dude, sorry I didn't get back to you about this before now. Yeah, see, that sounds like a better idea to me, to perhaps make a gay version of Angie Starr and have her do likewise with her own patients. I've previously used Susan and Barbara as character names, but again, nothing says they can't be used multiple times. And blackmail, that's another fun little nuance to toss in there. If she's a lesbian, I guess it would have been Barbara's daughter she originally took advantage of once upon a time...but I guess she could possibly be bi too. We can keep talking about it and see. Thanks! —Smokey

 

[Yippieh]

Hi Smokey125,

what is with this idea from me?

http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1282412

 

[Smokey125]

Yippieh

Hey Yippieh, it's Smokey. Thanks for linking me to your post. At first glance, it looks quite like Kink's Ultimate Surrender division of content. And I do hold some interest in that vein of girl-on-girl action as well as many others. I've considered doing a story or two to this effect, so if you like you can continue posting or message me and we can talk more about it.

 

[PSZer0Dark30]

Hello! So I have an idea I would love to see tackled. It's sort of based on a real-life event.

There was this girl I knew in college named Bridgette that was raised in a pretty religious family. All of our friends were pretty liberal and she seemed like despite her family upbringing (and her crazy mom) she was on our side most of the time on social things.

Then the vote came for gay marriage, and she voted against it. We were pretty shocked. Her best friend especially was pretty upset about the whole thing and while we were talking, she commented, "How would she feel if she was in love with a girl and couldn't get married." I ended up forming a whole fantasy around that idea. Essentially, what if Bridgette's best friend got her seduced by a lesbian. Bridgette has one of those passive personalities, where she sort of just starts acting like and getting influenced by whoever is around her.

So in the fantasy I had, her best friend would find a cute lesbian girl (not butch but petite with a pixie cut: brown hair, elfin features) and bring her into the friend group. The pixie girl would flirt with Bridgette (who is actually quite attractive: cute face, wide blue eyes, long blonde hair) and the more they hang out, the more Bridgette's best friend starts feeding into it. At first saying what's the harm and pointing out how pixie girl is sweet and nice if overly flirtatious. They go out dancing often and her friend gets Bridgette drunk and convinces her to dance with pixie girl and slowly Bridgette is having some feelings.

Everything comes to a head at a party. At this point, it's no secret that pixie girl wants Bridgette and they've danced together in clubs a number of times, overly touching during these times too. Bridgette herself acts very "school girl crush" around pixie. Everyone has been drinking and the best friend suggests a game of Truth or Dare that eventually gets pretty raunchy. Pixie and Bridgette get dared to kiss, things escalate a little from there, and then finally Pixie dares Bridgette to sleep with her. She stands up, reaches out her hand and Bridgette takes it and follows her to the bedroom where they have intense sex.

Where it goes from there is open for discussion but that's the general idea.

 

[Smokey125]

PSZer0Dark30

Hey, my friend, thanks for the reply. Another intriguing brainstorm. Very nice with the "right versus wrong" dynamic. Almost sounds a little like But I'm A Cheerleader, which I'm coincidentally actually watching right now typing this. So I'm guess I'm going to be a little more inclined to say that. But feel free to PM or feedback me and we can talk about it some more if you like.

 

[EmpressJosephine]

HERE is a FUTURE lesbian story!

 

[Smokey125]

EmpressJosephine

Oh, sci-fi. Yeah, I wrote a couple sci-fi/fantasy lesbian stories—not exactly this type, but fun to do nonetheless, to step out of reality for a while and so on. They didn't get as much attention as I'd have liked, but I enjoy them anyway. Well, again, feel free to PM or feedback me if you want to talk about it some more.

 

[EmpressJosephine]

Oh, sci-fi. Yeah, I wrote a couple sci-fi/fantasy lesbian stories—not exactly this type, but fun to do nonetheless, to step out of reality for a while and so on. They didn't get as much attention as I'd have liked, but I enjoy them anyway. Well, again, feel free to PM or feedback me if you want to talk about it some more.

I was both surprised and disappointed by how quickly the one I link to above fizzled out.

 

[Smokey125]

E.j. 2

Oh, I see what you're talking about. That's a different type of "future lesbian story." Yeah, that's a bummer. Mine don't seem to get a lot of love these days in general, but hopefully that'll change again one day.