Ideas for chapter 2, Help!

[Zad]

Ad Copy is one thing, but this is a whole new ball game for me. I'd Appreciate any, & All the input I can get. I'd like to see this story take a new twist. Any Idea's?? Thant's for all your Positive feed back so far, Zad

 

[Whispersecret]

I think you forgot to give us a link.

 

[Weird Harold]

I think you forgot to give us a link.

I'll take pity on a newby and proovide it:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=133343