ideas for a sequel

[geraldf]

I'm thinking about writing a sequel to a stroy I posted awhile back. The story is called RHONDA'S TOUCH. I think I know the direction I'd like the sequel to go in but I'd like to hear some other ideas as well. I'm computer challenged so I'm not sure how to get you to it from here but it's in the First Time section. I'd really like to get some feedback on the original story and hear some ideas for a sequel. Thanks.

Geraldf

 

[J.Q. Hack]

As a little help for gerald here's a link for his story: Rhonda's Touch

It seems to me that Rhonda has emotional issues and is very jaded when it comes to men and her relationships with them. After all she melted and her natural defenses she put up against Brad disappeared when all he asked for was a hug. Perhaps in a sequel Brad could turn on his natural charm and teach Rhonda a thing while she shows Brad all he has been missing. Of course breaking Rhonda's wall down wouldn't be easy but it could be done ... I could see a story with fitful starts that ends happy.

Perhaps despite Rhonda's acceptance of the hug and Brad's attempts at romance maybe she spuns him and turns Brad into a bitter, bitter man.

I don't know what you have in mind but those are some of my thoughts.

J.Q.