Ideas and Suggestions?

[CollegeGuy4OlderF]

Ive written a few stories, some of them are posted on here, but I have been hesitant to post any of my recent stories because I have had mixed reviews. I would love to hear some feedback and any suggestions yall may have!

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

CollegeGuy,

Bite the bullet and add the story you'd most like to have worked over to the list on the Discussion thread. While you're waiting for your turn in the barrel, do at least two or three critiques. When Pure gives you the nod, include a note mentioning things other's have complained about and/or items you'd most like checked out.

If you haven't done so already, I'd advise you to also post your story on the Story Feedback Forum. The comments usually aren't as detailed as the critiques given here, but there's no waiting list. There's no rule you can't do both.

Rumple Foreskin