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[creampiefreak15]

I got an idea for a story yesterday and decided to run worth it as my first lit story. First of I got to say I knew the category I wanted the story to be in but I didn't have a clue about the story it self yet.i was talking to people and reading some and them out popped into my head. Now before I tell you guys my idea I must earn you that this story is incest so of you don't like that you might want to stop reading now, but since we are all pervert freak lol. Okay to start off... The protagonist(who I might say is kinda based off of me) is a guy about my age maybe a little younger who is a writer for lit. He had a normal every day job like everyone else. When he was younger his dad died of colon cancer. So after his father died it was just him and his mother.


That is it so far I got so little thing other than that like hair weight that stuff. Sorry I couldn't tell you more but like I said I thought of this yesterday , so been thinking of making the mother a business owner or a lot writer also. If it is decided that the mother will be a lit writer then I will probably make it to where they keep it as a secret in the beginning and them they find out the truth

 

[MatthewVett]

I'm not certain how you write stories, but I do hope you proofread them more than this.

 

[creampiefreak15]

This will be my first

 

[Hypoxia]

How-2: Play the story like a movie in your mind's eye. Now blog it. Record everything that happens in your mental movie. Then go back and edit it, throw out the slow parts, juice-up the action, etc. No problem.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I guess this is a mommy son incest? I'm sorry between the poor grammar (and I hate to eb a grammar nazi but I was honestly confused a few times between the wrong word and poor context) it's not clear. How the father died is probably not important and could be cut. Think about say any Disney movie. The number of Disney mothers who are shown to be alive are few and far between. They are usually just dead (given the era many of the original stories were written it's a fair bet that child birth was what killed them but it's rarely stated at all. They are just gone. Except Nemo's mom. Bitch was eaten by a barracuda!)

After that you kinda need to flesh this out a bit. This isn't so much a story idea as it is a puff of smoke. I mean here's my super hero story.

The main character is young, and male, kinda based on me. His parents died tragically while he was young and one day he put on spandex and started hitting people. That's about as far as I got.

 

[Everyday_Man]

I guess this is a mommy son incest? I'm sorry between the poor grammar (and I hate to eb a grammar nazi but I was honestly confused a few times between the wrong word and poor context) it's not clear. How the father died is probably not important and could be cut.

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He could mention the way the father died in passing, but for the most part, if they are dead then it doesn't matter how they died, unless part of the pain of the spouses death is part of some emotional trauma that needs to be overcome.

 

[creampiefreak15]

First thing I need to say is damn barracuda why oh why did it have to be memos mom, lol.

Second, I'm sorry about the lack of details in my ideas. But to tell the truth that is pretty much as far as I have got so far, sorry guys.

Third, I suck at grammar and that stuff, when I am writing it I'll most likely proof read out like a thousand time, lol.

Also I hope to be able to get an experience writer to read it over for me and see what he or she thinks of it.

Lastly, I also hope that one of the editors can help clean up what mistakes I make with the grammar and all that.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Eb. . .it's like like the ebb and flow. I hate to ebb and flow like. . . .GODDAMNIT! I cede to your superiority. . .this time.

That barracuda was a dick.

Well flesh out the idea somewhat now, you have time and people who are clearly reading the thread. The thing is it's hard to give you an ideas when you didn't really give us a foundation to work on from the start. To use horror I can help you write a good Saw story or a good Friday the 13th. But crazy guy kill people doesn't give me enough unless I just want to run with my own plan.

If it's just generic incest you could probably just go look there are thousands upon thousands.

 

[creampiefreak15]

Yea I have read alot of the stories bout 4-6 years worth of them, lol. That I is why I'm having trouble how I want the story to go.

I have also been thinking bout the dad thing. I think I might just briefly mention the dad...i think it to soon to do the whole"dad dies and mom goes threw alot of emotional damage, them son comes to save mom from the damage with lots of love and lots of cum".

 

[Sean Renaud]

Then don't go that route. There are other paths you know? To go back to fairy tales Disney unless stated other wise (it's easy because everybody is familiar with them) the mothers are almost uniformly MIA as we've established earlier and in most cases it's either only mentioned that they are dead or it's never brought up at all.

So (to gender flip your idea for ease of language) the mother dies leaving the father to raise the child. By the time the story picks up the mandatory 18 years (or however far the child was from adulthood at the time of death) later most of the hurt is managable. But the daughter may as well be a clone of her mother despite having grown up not knowing her. Hell maybe you start the story with the daughter (henseforth Belle) bringing a friend over who is looking at the wall of pictures and asks why there is a picture of her in a wedding dress with her father. They have a lot of the same mannerism as well for some reason and it just kind of flows from there.

 

[creampiefreak15]

I see what you mean I'm glad I got smart people here to help me

 

[Sean Renaud]

Of you could flip it and her Dad is her idea of what a man should be. Which isn't unusual amongst children of either gender. My Daddy can beat your Daddy is practically school yard 101. She's been dating and dating but none of the guys are what she's looking for her.

There is a movie right now with Anne Hathaway and Robert DeNiro that I can't recall the name of where she's a CEO and he's an intern. And one line she drops is "how did men go from Harrison Ford and Jack Nicholson to. . ." And the camera shifts to three "nerds". (Personally I think we went from Ford and Nicholson to The Rock and Jason Stathem and it was a trade up in everything but sheer acting ability but she was talking about masculinity anyway.) Same deal. She can't find a millenial who is a "real man" (Define as you please I'm certainly not in the mood for that debate.) and she's constantly seeing her father as the real deal and then advance as you will.