Idea for a VERY dark story

BlackPlague88

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Hello! This is my first time posting and I’m looking for people who can help me out with an idea I have for a story, that hopefully someone will write for me. It is a VERY dark, perverse extreme gangbang/cuckold story that I have in mind. That goes like this:

A married 35 year old mother of 2, named Kelly, has an ongoing fantasy about being gangbanged, without her husband knowing. This fantasy has been in her mind for more than 10 years and now the urge is so big that she can’t resist it anymore, so she places an ad online. To witch a small club of 4 older men react. She talks with them and they seem very nice at first but they turn out to be a bunch of sadistic pigs that want to use and abuse her in the most extreme ways. She wants it rough, but she has no idea how brutal they are going to use her. They eventually video tape the gangbang for their own use but one of them ends up sending the tape to Kelly’s husband. The story is told through his point of view as he watches the tape and sees what depraved acts these 4 men made his beautiful wife do. And how much she secretly enjoyed it. Eventually the husband breaks down in horror and emotion as the tape and story ends.

Now, some of the acts that the 4 men make the wife Kelly do:



- lots of kissing and tongue sucking (to make it personal for her husband)

- A LOT of spitting in her mouth (the 4 men take turns spitting in her mouth through the entire story, many many times)

- Groping her and manhandling her breasts (pinching her nipples, slapping her breasts)

- Fingering both her holes and making her squirt
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A LOT of name calling (cheap slut, married whore, cunt,dog… anything you can think of)

- Making fun of her husband, making fun of the fact that she’s a mother

- hard anal fucking and very dirty ass to mouth (lots of talking to her about the taste of their dicks after anal)

- Airtight double penetration, super fast and hard making her scream

- She has to give them all rim jobs (she complaints about the taste but is so horny that she doesn’t mind at this point)

- Slapping her face and chocking her during the dp

- Making her call her husbands name while they fuck her

- Anal creampies that she has to eat/drink

- After all this, the 4 men piss in her mouth.

She is on a leash/collar and is wearing a pink fishnet body suit. She’s got big natural breast and a busty body with a big butt. The location for the gangbang has to be, a cheap motel or a cabin they rented.

I’m aware that this is a very, very rough story idea but It would be so awesome if someone could please turn this into a 6,7 page long story with a short introduction and lots of extreme nasty action.

I’m willing to pay you for writing this story, I can pay through Paypal. Money is no problem, name your price. You can contact me via mail at: Email Removed Thanks in advance.

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You should activate your PMs and ask potential takers to contact you that way. Openly posting e-mail addresses is prohibited in the forum.
 
I’m aware that this is a very, very rough story idea but It would be so awesome if someone could please turn this into a 6,7 page long story with a short introduction and lots of extreme nasty action.
Why don't you just write it yourself? Why would anyone want to...

I’m willing to pay you for writing this story, I can pay through Paypal. Money is no problem, name your price. You can contact me via mail at: Thanks in advance.

...and now you have my attention. ;)
Should've led with this. Feel free to PM me and we can discuss this further.

Happy Mothers Day
Nailed it. :D
 
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oh allright, i'm new here sorry if I sound dumb, but how do I activate my Pm's? So that people can contact me that way? Thank you!
 
oh allright, i'm new here sorry if I sound dumb, but how do I activate my Pm's? So that people can contact me that way? Thank you!

Top left, "User CP", then "Edit Options", find the section titled "Private Messaging", tick the check box. Also, don't forget to edit your initial post.
 
Way too much humilation for me. You're probably going to have a difficult time finding anyone to hit all those kink points, even with money on the table.

I wouldn't be surprised if this post gets taken down at the other place you posted it, because they have a much harder line on consent and rough sex, which what you're looking for probably crosses.
 
I don’t see how this is a dark story. The husband watches the video of his wife getting fucked by 4 guys and she loved it and he jacks off to it. Sounds like Loving Wives to me.
 
I'm assuming you're 'chocking her" so she can't roll away during the DP?

Maybe this will help

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As long as you want the wife to enjoy it, I can deliver this most of this with no problem with the exception of the pissing, that's not my thing. I suppose I could take a try with it, but not sure what it would come out like.



Send me a PM if you want to discuss it.
 
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There is at least one other site that would take this, no questions asked. If you PM me, I could mention a couple of sites. I don't know what Laurel would think about it here.

Only once have I written a story based on someone's else's idea. I had his permission; he already had published a version of it. (It was sort of a spoof.) Your idea doesn't seem like my cup of tea.

You should really try to write this yourself. It's a lot of work, but the payoff of getting your own work published is almost addictive. That's why most of us write.
 
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