I'd like to try this...

[blackstallion21]

Some of you might know me as an editor, but I'd like to try this and have someone look at my latest piece and maybe send a few pointers my way if you have any!

PM me or respond to this thread, and I'll send it to you!

I've already submitted it, but I am FULLY WILLING To edit and resubmit if you have good advice! AND constructive crit is welcomed too!!!

 

[Toqueme]

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[blackstallion21]

I do, it's the last story I posted, but I'll be shooting it over soon!

Thanks!