I would really appreciate a beta reader or two, and I am happy to return the favor.

[HappySpouse]

I have written a sequel to my story Working the Boss. I would appreciate some general feedback on what works and doesn't work from anyone willing to read it. I will gladly return the favor and give similar feedback on any story you may be working on.

Here are some details about the story (as is):

Title: Working the Boss: Working at Home

Length: 6,500 words

Synopsis: In order for Emma and Michelle to continue their Dom/sub relationship without ruining Emma's marriage, Michelle carries out a plan that both gets the husband to agree to a mutually beneficial arrangement and demonstrates her insurmountable sexual prowess.

Category/Genre: I'm not really sure. It doesn't have any of the themes that put the first chapter in NonCon.

 

[MetaBob]

I have written a sequel to my story Working the Boss. I would appreciate some general feedback on what works and doesn't work from anyone willing to read it. I will gladly return the favor and give similar feedback on any story you may be working on.

Here are some details about the story (as is):

Title: Working the Boss: Working at Home

Length: 6,500 words

Synopsis: In order for Emma and Michelle to continue their Dom/sub relationship without ruining Emma's marriage, Michelle carries out a plan that both gets the husband to agree to a mutually beneficial arrangement and demonstrates her insurmountable sexual prowess.

Category/Genre: I'm not really sure. It doesn't have any of the themes that put the first chapter in NonCon.

I'd actually read Working The Boss already and liked it. I would be happy to read its sequel and offer whatever feedback comes to me, which might take a couple weeks, probably in more than one tranche.

Please commit to reading some new thing of mine, listed in my sig, in return.

 

[DaisyWriter]

Feel free to message me if you are still looking for input.