I would love some help...

[teresawrites2u]

I’ve tried to use the right channels for contacting editors and I'm just about to give up. So, I’m putting out a call to ANYONE interested in giving me some feedback, please e-mail me and I’ll send you the story, heck I’d post it here if it didn’t offend or break a rule. I can feel it’s potential to go on forever but as of yet this is what it covers.

The story touches on:

Exhibitionist & Voyeurism
Fetish - maybe
First Time - yes
Group Sex - yes
Satire - little
Incest – hint
Interracial - yes
NonConsent/Reluctance – both parties
NonHuman – Gods, nymphs, you name it.
Romance - little
Fantasy - yes

And I don’t know if it a subcategory or not but:
Religion

 

[Dar~]

I’ve tried to use the right channels for contacting editors and I'm just about to give up. So, I’m putting out a call to ANYONE interested in giving me some feedback, please e-mail me and I’ll send you the story, heck I’d post it here if it didn’t offend or break a rule. I can feel it’s potential to go on forever but as of yet this is what it covers.

The story touches on:

Exhibitionist & Voyeurism
Fetish - maybe
First Time - yes
Group Sex - yes
Satire - little
Incest – hint
Interracial - yes
NonConsent/Reluctance – both parties
NonHuman – Gods, nymphs, you name it.
Romance - little
Fantasy - yes

And I don’t know if it a subcategory or not but:
Religion

dndjsp@yahoo.com

 

[Colleen Thomas]

I'm an awful copy editor, but if you need just an opinion and some general fedback, you can pm me a copy.

Welcome to the Ah

 

[teresawrites2u]

I'm such a Virgin

OK I love to send it to you, but I get a dirty message, not the fun kind that says I've turned that option off. Ha I don't even know where that would be! Can you help me out, I swear that I probably am this stupid, but hey if I didn't say anything....

I see you have a diver photo... coool.

Thanks ahead of time,
Teresa

 

[moonlight elf]

OK I love to send it to you, but I get a dirty message, not the fun kind that says I've turned that option off. Ha I don't even know where that would be! Can you help me out, I swear that I probably am this stupid, but hey if I didn't say anything....

I see you have a diver photo... coool.

Thanks ahead of time,
Teresa

I'd offer to edit but I suck at it. But I think I can help you out here.

Go to the User CP....it should be on the top left corner of this page. Under Settings & Options you will find Edit Options. Click on that and there you can turn on the email option.

Good Luck and Welcome to the AH!!

Moonlight.

 

[snooper]

I have had a look at it and have some comments, but don't really want to make them public. Email me on dawiro@onetel.com and I'll send them to you.

 

[lil_elvis]

teresa,

welcome to the AH. I've copied the file into WORD and will give it a look over the weekend. 19 pages too much for a quick look now.

l_e

 

[Pure]

hi t,

first of all, this is an unmoderated forum, with few rules other than literotica's. there is nothing stopping the posting of a story to a thread, or better, making a thread whose first entry is the story. (I've never been able to find out the actual limit the software at lit. imposes for a single posting, but it is not small, certainly not less than 5000 words.)

it's more a matter of etiquette, to provide a link or url, as you have done; that way threads don't get cluttered with immense chunks. also, if I see a 30 inch long posting, there's a good chance I'll move right on past it. (like you do those people at a bar or party who wish to tell a *very* long story about themselves.)

i'd say your best bet is to find some others that write fantasy/romance stories with a dash of sex. write to some authors of stories you like, and maybe set up a swap.

when asking for free editing, it's easiest with stories that don't have a bazillion words, like this one (your story has 10,000 plus words). Try for something in the 1500-3000 word category. you're more likely to get a volunteer (worker for free) to help you paint a fence, than a six story mansion.

you might consider visting the Story Discussion circle and *offering* some comments as a way of inducing people to offer what *you* want.

 

[Black Tulip]

Hi Teresa,

Welcome to the AH.

Not offering to edit, there's others who are better at it. LOL

Just wanted to point to my sig: Newbie Support Forum.
Could be a useful place.