I would love some feedback

GlitterKitten

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This is the second story that I have written, it is called 'Briefest Encounter'.

http://www.literotica.com/s/briefest-encounter

I would really appreciate it if I could get some feedback on it, and perhaps on how to improve my writing in general. I am completely self-taught and so everything will be of a great help to me. It is my dream to write at least one erotic novel and in the meantime I am writing short erotic fiction to try and hone my skills. I am eager to learn.
 
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