I would love some feedback and constructive criticism

[Kot_Carson]

Y'lo everyone,

I'm new here, began reading the stories with my wife just a few months ago. She's been a reader here for over a decade. We both love it here

Anyway, I've been trying to write for my own pleasure of creative writing and am pretty happy with the scores my stories have been receiving. That said, I feel one can always improve.

What I'd love is to hear some creative criticism and feedback on the stories I've written so far. That way I can continue to improve as I write future chapters in my two ongoing stories as well as new stories altogether.

Click here for my profile with all my stories.

I know that I'm not the best at writing erotic scenes, so suggestions of ways to spice up my stories would be fantastic! Any input I can get will be very much appreciated. That said, if you can't offer any advice other than, "You suck" or "Your writing is terrible" please keep it to yourself since that will neither help me improve as a writer and will just make me feel like an exceptional failure and wonder why I'm receiving the scores my stories currently are. I'm also not looking for pure compliments, those won't help me improve as a writer either. I sincerely want to improve at writing erotica for your enjoyment, gentle Lit readers!

Thanks a lot in advance! Have a happy new year!

 

[lovecraft68]

Time

Y'lo everyone,

I'm new here, began reading the stories with my wife just a few months ago. She's been a reader here for over a decade. We both love it here

Anyway, I've been trying to write for my own pleasure of creative writing and am pretty happy with the scores my stories have been receiving. That said, I feel one can always improve.

What I'd love is to hear some creative criticism and feedback on the stories I've written so far. That way I can continue to improve as I write future chapters in my two ongoing stories as well as new stories altogether.

Click here for my profile with all my stories.

I know that I'm not the best at writing erotic scenes, so suggestions of ways to spice up my stories would be fantastic! Any input I can get will be very much appreciated. That said, if you can't offer any advice other than, "You suck" or "Your writing is terrible" please keep it to yourself since that will neither help me improve as a writer and will just make me feel like an exceptional failure and wonder why I'm receiving the scores my stories currently are. I'm also not looking for pure compliments, those won't help me improve as a writer either. I sincerely want to improve at writing erotica for your enjoyment, gentle Lit readers!

Thanks a lot in advance! Have a happy new year!

Hi,
I will try to get time to read your stuff soon but just wanted to say this. First off thats great you and the wife share this passion you'll find she can be quite helpful with those scenes. My wife and I role play and we even do Brother sister which is where i created my characters so make use of your partner! Also before you get into whether people think you are good or not ask yourself this very important question; Are you having fun? If you are than fuck it what else matters?

 

[Kot_Carson]

Of course I'm having fun