I was thinking....

[jessy19]

I wanted to do a story about twin brother's being in love with their younger sister. I don't know if I should make them sort of compete for her affection or what. But i know I want them three to end up together at the end. What do you all think?

 

[silversword]

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When you say you want them to end up together at the end do you mean all of them in a love triangle type arrangement or just the sister and one brother.

Competing would make a more interesting angle to the story, most people would make it simpler and do the borthers ganging up on her and turning it into a group sex story.

 

[pop_54]

Hmmmmm

Depends on your stamina Jess, make them compete and you'll need to make it a long drawn out tale with a lot of twists and turns on the way.

That's fine, and quite an interesting scenario, but it will not be appreciated by the average red neck reader who's just looking for a story to wank in time with.

If you are like me most times and write to suit yourself as much as the readership, you'll probably enjoy developing this longer version.

If on the other hand you wish to get an idea in print and out of your head as soon as possible, as I also do on occasions, then scenario two is the one to go for, and virtually guarantees a long lasting relationship with all three siblings. Family reunions will be such fun in years to come, hehe!!

The twin brothers idea is good, and could be fun to work with.

I usually bracket the siblings, older bro to sis, with younger still bro joining the fun later. Boring or what

 

[jessy19]

Well I was thinking the twins could compete at first and then then the sister ends up pregnant and has no clue who the daddy is so they all decided to stay together as a little love triangle? I don't know if that's too much drama though lol..

 

[Rumple Foreskin]

Jessy,

Your idea reminds me of Larry McMurtry's second novel, "Leaving Cheyenne." In turn of the century west Texas, two guys and a gal are best friends. She won't marry either one because that'd cut the other one out. However, she continues to sleep with both of them, even when married to a third guy.

As Pop said, the story you're discussing could have some interesting twists. The main problem I see is how to bring it to a end that will satisfy readers. Good luck.

Rumple

 

[jessy19]

Yeah this story could get quite complicated. I'm thinking of just giving up on it! I had a good idea once but now i'm losing it. Damn writers block lol

 

[sanchopanza]

Reminds me of Cronenberg's 'Dead Ringers' where Jeremy Irons plays two twin brothers and they have different personalities and the confident one sometimes charms women just to let his brother screw them. Whats with all the twins stories all of a sudden? You could have an interesting, almost Shakespearian subtheme where appearance versus reality is a constant consideration.

 

[sirhugs]

a twist

how about Sis is fucking Bro1, but when she sneaks into his room one night,, its Bro2 in the bed. She doesn't know this. Bro2 had no idea she was doing Bro1- he just crashed there ( maybe he lives in his own apt?). After this he wants more more more. Does he scheme to switch again? Blackmail Bro1? at this point, my idea gets fuzzy.....