SkarlittFeenicks
Virgin
- Joined
- Jan 20, 2007
- Posts
- 11
My reason for rejection-
Please break up & fix the punctuation of your dialogue. The convention is one speaker per paragraph, so whenever someone new says something, start a new a paragraph. Also, with dialogue you include periods, commas, exclamation points, or question marks inside the quotes.-
I have tried to pick and choose an editor but unfortuntaely don't seem to be getting anywhere. Please check out my other work and let me know via email or pm if you would like to help me out.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely,
Skarlitt
Please break up & fix the punctuation of your dialogue. The convention is one speaker per paragraph, so whenever someone new says something, start a new a paragraph. Also, with dialogue you include periods, commas, exclamation points, or question marks inside the quotes.-
I have tried to pick and choose an editor but unfortuntaely don't seem to be getting anywhere. Please check out my other work and let me know via email or pm if you would like to help me out.
Thanks in advance.
Sincerely,
Skarlitt