I think I am in love...oh help me!

[echoes_s]

nm, ranting

something like that

my heart

so quietly it sits,
feather flutter beat
of wing tip
on skin,
waiting for the next breath.

Wild, feral,
strewn astray by life
and cast aside,
hidden in matted
leaf for protection

now seeking home
through eyes closed
yet open in dreams,
to be cupped,
precarious

yearns to be tender
stroked, stoked,
and free fettered
by confinements
of the untouched.

my soul

a minstrel,
an echoed tail wisp,
ethereal,
seeking canyons
beyond sight,

caverns without depth.
Haunting, eerie
chorded starvation
through decades
of denial,

seeking mortality,
unity of being,
home for the beast
of song.
Can you hear her howl?

A silent keen,
ricochets
of desire
to no longer sift
through afterlife.

my mind

Sharp, inquisitive,
a book half full
opened to the next empty page,
exhaling to complete
a symbol,

looped letter
cohesive with form,
a word interconnected.
Diamond to graphite,
liquefied gold,

bonded, propel
opulent correlation
to fulfill chapters
of a lifetime...
please

turn the next page
so that I may
realize
this transition
is for us.

my body

a tempestuous storm,
meteorites raging,
aphelia
seeking sun,
gravitational pull


gone awry,
the milky way
frothed, disoriented,
needing formation
and impact,

fleshly configuration,
god I beg you
send an orbital
determination
of grinding minerals

intensified to sinuous
solution,
an elegant embrace,
a new star fluctuating...
before I explode!


now you know why I say oh help

 

[SeattleRain]

my heart


ok, love or lust???
I know to slow down, having only talked to him for 3 days and not met but exchanged pictures...

but my god, has anyone felt like this and is it love or lust please. If it is love then this is the first for me. No one has ever impacted me so

felt like this
yes
once

don't try to define it
just hold on tight to something
and enjoy the ride baby
enjoy the ride...

 

[echoes_s]

felt like this
yes
once

don't try to define it
just hold on tight to something
and enjoy the ride baby
enjoy the ride...

so just a leaf blowing in the wind and once the wind dies...all is gone right?

sighs, oh well


thanks hon

 

[SeattleRain]

so just a leaf blowing in the wind and once the wind dies...all is gone right?

sighs, oh well


thanks hon

I didn't say that!!!



sheesh



I just meant enjoy it, don't worry about if it is love or lust.... just enjoy it, you are among the fortunate to have this....whatever it is

 

[SeattleRain]

oop
i just noticed you removed the poems

jeez you are as fickle as I am

you want me to delete my quote of your first post?

 

[echoes_s]

oop
i just noticed you removed the poems

jeez you are as fickle as I am

you want me to delete my quote of your first post?

lol, no no, I feel foolish...I mean geesh, someone my age going through something like this and...

has to be menopause, I am all flustered.!!!

and you know me, I think most of my poems are either too personal, dark or silly any ways.


god I cant believe I sent them to him...how will I ever talk to him again. Maybe he won't talk to me....sighs


thanks for answering and helping out. I'll put them back up but trust me I am trying to talk myself out of this

 

[SeattleRain]

lol, no no, I feel foolish...I mean geesh, someone my age going through something like this and...

has to be menopause, I am all flustered.!!!

and you know me, I think most of my poems are either too personal, dark or silly any ways.


god I cant believe I sent them to him...how will I ever talk to him again. Maybe he won't talk to me....sighs


thanks for answering and helping out. I'll put them back up but trust me I am trying to talk myself out of this

why? just let go. are you afraid of being a fool. what OTHER reason is there to be a fool?

wholly to be a fool when spring is in the air.....

eecummings knew best

 

[The_Fool]

why? just let go. are you afraid of being a fool. what OTHER reason is there to be a fool?

wholly to be a fool when spring is in the air.....

eecummings knew best

Nods head foolishly....

 

[CharleyH]

Nods head foolishly....

Anything you do is awesome, even a nod! GREAT TO SEE YOU!

 

[SeattleRain]

Nods head foolishly....

ah there we go! you are adorable when you nod!

 

[BooMerengue]

Echoes! Echoes! Echoes! My love! How lucky you are! baby- just ride it. ride it and feel it and taste it and be in the moment. Don't worry about what if? So what?


and keep us all filled in on all the details, ok??

 

[echoes_s]

why? just let go. are you afraid of being a fool. what OTHER reason is there to be a fool?

wholly to be a fool when spring is in the air.....

eecummings knew best

Nods head foolishly....

Anything you do is awesome, even a nod! GREAT TO SEE YOU!

ah there we go! you are adorable when you nod!

Echoes! Echoes! Echoes! My love! How lucky you are! baby- just ride it. ride it and feel it and taste it and be in the moment. Don't worry about what if? So what?


and keep us all filled in on all the details, ok??

Sighs…
I feel like the flower girl is back from the past, spreading love…oh my!

Keep you filled in???

This is how life is rippling like a leaf in a gentle stream

Early spring glows in autumn

Enraptured,
willful capture by sunray,
pulsed shimmer turning slow,
graceful plummeted pirouette
as petals of liquid sighs
plumed flutter against
unclothed and suppliant skin.

His breath, soft
whispers, ricocheted miles absent
as words painted throbbing
heartbeat, a painful escalate
into torn threadbare desire,
aching seared compellation
then ecstasy trembles tranquility.

Rivulets brim, spill
pooled wading dreams,
serene aspirations shared,
escalated longing to be
for genteel convergence
or fiery lock of glance,
embraced by unwavering breeze

Two cohesive one,
fettered abandoned leaf in early spring
on a gingered sugar maple
before sap ran sweet,
solidify upon soothing freeze
before gasped moment,
soft palpitations finally free.

 

[echoes_s]

and i know all those posts werent for me, but share the love...
my heart cant take anymore before it explodes!

 

[Liar]

Early spring glows in autumn

Enraptured,
willful capture by sunray,
pulsed shimmer turning slow,
graceful plummeted pirouette
as petals of liquid sighs
plumed flutter against
unclothed and suppliant skin.

His breath, soft
whispers, ricocheted miles absent
as words painted throbbing
heartbeat, a painful escalate
into torn threadbare desire,
aching seared compellation
then ecstasy trembles tranquility.

Rivulets brim, spill
pooled wading dreams,
serene aspirations shared,
escalated longing to be
for genteel convergence
or fiery lock of glance,
embraced by unwavering breeze

Two cohesive one,
fettered abandoned leaf in early spring
on a gingered sugar maple
before sap ran sweet,
solidify upon soothing freeze
before gasped moment,
soft palpitations finally free.

Ok...damn. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. Have you got any idea how perfectly you master phonetics? Reading this loud makes my tongue do things I didn't know it could. I bow to your pen. A little L seems to do you good in more ways than one.

 

[bogusbrig]

Love is a bucket
With a hole in the bottom
It's a pointless pot
To piss in

Just put it on a plinth
And sign it R Mutt
And people will admire it
For what it isn't

 

[OceanGoddess]

Oh it's lovely to read your joy!

I'm feeling rather besotted with someone as well. Isn't it thrilling, wonderful, joyful and beautiful?! (I don't know that I'd call what's happening to me "love" quite yet . . .maybe never, who knows? But I'm all giggly and excited. )



Others said it and I will also . . .hold on and enjoy it, my dear. It doesn't happen that often, if ever, to some.

 

[echoes_s]

Ok...damn. I've said it before, and I'll say it again. Have you got any idea how perfectly you master phonetics? Reading this loud makes my tongue do things I didn't know it could. I bow to your pen. A little L seems to do you good in more ways than one.

Liar!

long time

Thanks sweetie, missed you! How have you been?
lol, uhmm, no, I just say what I feel and how it feels to me, tis not deliberate at all
but thanks always to you, you have always encouraged me and seduced me with your writing. Talk about rumbling and growling...

as Boo would say...Baby!

 

[echoes_s]

Love is a bucket
With a hole in the bottom
It's a pointless pot
To piss in

Just put it on a plinth
And sign it R Mutt
And people will admire it
For what it isn't

Love is inner beauty,
selfless sharing of coquettish wink,
twitch of shared fantasy unknown,
a spark vibrant
journeyed through links,
interconnected
if only by a smile

love is about vivacity...
if the pot has a hole in the bottom
then two complement side by side,
in the end all intermingle,
adhere intensity feeding each another
raises heartbeat stance
to virulent hammering

 

[echoes_s]

Oh it's lovely to read your joy!

I'm feeling rather besotted with someone as well. Isn't it thrilling, wonderful, joyful and beautiful?! (I don't know that I'd call what's happening to me "love" quite yet . . .maybe never, who knows? But I'm all giggly and excited. )



Others said it and I will also . . .hold on and enjoy it, my dear. It doesn't happen that often, if ever, to some.

it's...gasping just before a fall!

I still am not sure if it's love also, but god I am hanging on for all it's worth!

 

[My Erotic Tale]

it is as natural as rain
to want a hearts flame

a dance in which two embark
enjoy it hunni
all the way till the song stops...(~_~)




then you can say you danced
the dance of love.

 

[Guest]

For echoes_s ~ with love.

Help me
I think I’m falling
In love again
When I get that crazy feeling, I know
I’m in trouble again
I’m in trouble
’cause you’re a rambler and a gambler
And a sweet-taiking-ladies man
And you love your lovin’
But not like you love your freedom

Help me
I think I’m falling
In love too fast
It’s got me hoping for the future
And worrying about the past
’cause I’ve seen some hot hot blazes
Come down to smoke and ash
We love our lovin’
But not like we love our freedom

Didn’t it feel good
We were sitting there talking
Or lying there not talking
Didn’t it feel good
You dance with the lady
With the hole in her stocking
Didn’t it feel good
Didn’t it feel good

Help me
I think I’m falling
In love with you
Are you going to let me go there by myself
That’s such a lonely thing to do
Both of us flirting around
Flirting and flirting
Hurting too
We love our lovin’
But not like we love our freedom

 

[OceanGoddess]

it's...gasping just before a fall!

Indeed it is! Beautiful description. Best wishes for you and the object of your attentions.

 

[Man Ray]

No one...

...can help you in these situations so just go with the flow and enjoy the adventure. I know this from experience and as I've enjoyed, and am enjoying, every minute of my adventure I say, "Have fun!"

 

[cward2]

Enjoy this most beautiful of feelings

***
Love

I feel her kiss
Everywhere I go.
In the streets,
In the sky,
In the clouds
That watch over me
At night.

 

[RhymeFairy]

Just wanna wish you eternal joy and happiness.
I also agree with most of the other friends here. Enjoy this time, treasure it.
Make it yours gurl ~!!
In my humble opinion, this is gonna be one of the best times of your life. Something to look back on in awe and wonder. The great thing, if it works out, you shall be forever changed, as a person. If it does not, then use this as a learning experience of what to do, and what not to do.
Remember what you want in life, and what you need to do to accomplish that. Then intergrade this relationship into that, seeing how it works. If you really want something my friend then go for it. Be it man, beast, job or thought.
Bring who you are inside ... out, be happy and loved.
Here is to you, and yours. Much success and Happiness ~