I really tried on this one . . .

[voluptuary_manque]

Some feedback on this, please. This is the first time I wasn't just larking around.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=352751

 

[LadyIlsa]

I enjoyed it and left my comment. Now I have to go read the ones you didn't put any effort into!

 

[mjl2010]

I know I enjoyed when I got my early peek. Glad to you see posted this VM.

MJL

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

I started reading. When I got to the bottom of page 1 discovered there were 3 more pages. It's late. I'll finish it tomorrow.