I promised I'd get an editor if I wrote again.

[waratah]

Have one story 'published', mostly very well received, but rightly pointed out that need an editor. (please consider reading my only effort on line before considering editing with me, its an ending to the "Laws of the Heart" series.)

I've written a big story that I really feel could be a cracker, an romance between two highly different , interesting and likable people. (A young, bright, and take charge female engineer and an older, slower, decent but limited labouring type guy). With out giving too much away its more romance than erotica, has its moments (I hope) and maybe on reading a draft you think I could change the emphasis that would be fine.

IMHO dialogue and original senarios are my strength, however consistency of my character's behaviour perhaps isn't. HELP!

Tried the editors board, I was picking younger lady editors to help with a female POV, but they faded, I think due to the size of the story (it will probably end up as a Novella, or a big romance story or maybe even a illustrated story) or, God forbid, the story is crap. So now I'm not going to target young female editors, just anyone help me get it technically right and if you can help with the female POV that would be a bonus.

Again, be warned, its big, if you're interested and genuine I'd really appreciate a line.

 

[CWatson]

I'll give it a shot. Send me a PM and let's work out the details.

 

[waratah]

CWatson did give it a shot, and I'm greatfull for his work on cpt 1 (which was posted today), however he's gone and got involved in his own story, tsk tsk tsk, and prefers to keep going with it while the creative juices are flowing.

If there is anyone else out there interested in helping with chp 2 I'd love some help.

The story was called "Don's wet dream" and as I say its there to read if you'd like to consider before committing.

 

[_Lynn_]

CWatson did give it a shot, and I'm greatfull for his work on cpt 1 (which was posted today), however he's gone and got involved in his own story, tsk tsk tsk, and prefers to keep going with it while the creative juices are flowing.

If there is anyone else out there interested in helping with chp 2 I'd love some help.

The story was called "Don's wet dream" and as I say its there to read if you'd like to consider before committing.

It helps if you add the link to your sig. Some of us are too lazy to go searching.

 

[waratah]

It helps if you add the link to your sig. Some of us are too lazy to go searching.

Thanks for tip, think thats fixed, (now, how do I check it?)

 

[fieryjen]

Did you go to your User CP, under signatures, and add the link?

Because it doesn't look like you have anything in your signature right now. It should show up automatically.

 

[CWatson]

Meanwhile, here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=383204

And, just so you know, waratah, there's already the coveted Red H. TOLD you you'd get it.

 

[waratah]

Meanwhile, here's the link:

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=383204

And, just so you know, waratah, there's already the coveted Red H. TOLD you you'd get it.

Oh that link!!! Thanks buddy! (Again)