I need some intelligent feedback on a novel

[MysteryWriter]

The novel is "Find Julie." It is a murder mystery so if anyone has a few extra hours of their life to use give it a read. If you would be so kind drop me a line.. Thank You... Please don't just insult me and hide. Thank you...

 

[KillerMuffin]

I can't help you this afternoon, not enough time, but you may enjoy a look through here:


http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=60962

 

[TheScribe]

A Fair Trade

Writer:

I will be happy to read your story, vote on it and give you feedback and ask you to do the same for me. Mine is a work in progress, so don't expect a conclusion just yet.

If interested, drop me an email and start reading. Here's the link to the Prologue to my story: http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=31294

TheScribe

 

[TheScribe]

A Fair Trade

Writer:

I will be happy to read your story, vote on it and give you feedback and ask you to do the same for me. Mine is a work in progress, so don't expect a conclusion just yet.

If interested, drop me an email and start reading. Here's the link to the Prologue to my story.

TheScribe