I need some help

[MasterAlastair]

Okay I have this idea for a story the idea is to have all these sexual BDSM undertones without actually coming out with it I mean you have the basic master/mistress and slave relationship but it really doesn't show it. How can I convey the right amount of sexuallity without being obvious about it?

 

[nakdsub]

Wow! Now there's a challenge...

You could actually do it using a few methods. Use a lot of double entendres in their speech. Use hints, ei; She saw a policeman on the street with his handcuffs hanging from his belt and shuddered remembering the scene from two weeks ago. Or, she smiled at the sight of the handcuffs, handcuffs always made her smile with erotic memories.

 

[Etaski]

Hmm...

Well, 2 questions:

What is the time/setting of the story?

Where does the source of power come from?

My favorite thing about more subtle BDSM overtones is the power-flow that you pick up in the interactions. That's my first thought, anyway. Anything more specific for me would depend on that source, because that's what I'd play up.

 

[MasterAlastair]

Hmm...

Well, 2 questions:

What is the time/setting of the story?

Where does the source of power come from?

My favorite thing about more subtle BDSM overtones is the power-flow that you pick up in the interactions. That's my first thought, anyway. Anything more specific for me would depend on that source, because that's what I'd play up.

It's a supernatural genre in modern times where the dominate has power over the subbordinate. The subordinate is often rebellious and as a result the dominate will bind them using magic or uses spells to make them how shall I say complient.

 

[Etaski]

It's a supernatural genre in modern times where the dominate has power over the subbordinate. The subordinate is often rebellious and as a result the dominate will bind them using magic or uses spells to make them how shall I say complient.

Oh.... That's...actually right up my alley.

A mix of more blatant Mind Control & Non-consent/Reluctance, with BDSM being the undertone. It's a good idea in general for a story, and definitely can be done.

Wish I had some examples right to mind that you could read to get an idea how to do it...damn.

How much or how little explicit sex did you want to put in the story? You're mentioning compulsion spells, but you're saying you don't want the BDSM to be obvious. So how far on the "graphic acts" scale are we talking, between 1 (non-erotic) and 10 (plot, what plot?)?

 

[amofiga]

Okay I have this idea for a story the idea is to have all these sexual BDSM undertones without actually coming out with it I mean you have the basic master/mistress and slave relationship but it really doesn't show it. How can I convey the right amount of sexuallity without being obvious about it?

You could show dominance and submission in other aspects of the relationship. One character orders the other to do something that is non sexual (go get the damned paper for God's sake. Do I have to wait all day?). Other reacts in a very submissive way and is afraid that there will be anger or rejection because of the delay. When the couple has sex, one orders or forces the other into actions. ("Get doen there and suck my cock ( lick my cunt) dammit. Why do I always have to ask you? When the hell are you going to learn what I want?) One can forcefully tell one or the other what they want them to wear when they go out. ("Here, take that ugly thing off and wear this. I like this one better.) One or the other can humiliate the other with things like (I don't know why I even bother keep you around other than I like the way you lick my cunt.) If they're driving home from a movie, the guy takes his dick out of pants and says 'Why don't you get over here and make your mouth useful for a change.)

It depends on how dominant you want someone to be. Maybe it's just interrupting one or the other while ordering in a restaurant when saying "You don't want that, I'll order for us." How about just grabbing a womans wrists and pinning them over her head while fucking or grabbing them and holding them around her back while a guy kisses her. Something forceful and dominannt without being over done. A lot of women like that sort of aggression short of dom/sub. Maybe the woman forcefully pushes a guys face between her legs and holds it thre forecefully demanding "Eat it". A lot of guys like a degree of sexual aggressiveness in women without feeling like they are bowing to mistress whoever.

Think about it.

 

[sapphicus68]

is the movie the secretary along the lines of what you are thinking? (one of my all time favorite - i need a james spader - lol

 

[MasterAlastair]

is the movie the secretary along the lines of what you are thinking? (one of my all time favorite - i need a james spader - lol

Yes actually in the story the sub is intitially a Personal Assistant that's made supernatural deal with the dom in exchange for a favor. As a result the deal/spell makes the sub complient while still mainting their free will(in other words the sub doesn't go into a trance or anything they just lose control of their body.) I didn't go with the trance thing because I think that takes the fun out of it. Like Klaus my fav villain once said "I could have compelled her to behave but a true ripper enjoys the hunt."

 

[Aurantica]

Maybe the woman just sort of melts into a more submissive poition during everyday activities like lunch out... He orders for her, decides where she will sit, what she will drink etc.

Or he could start giving orders in the bedroom. Telling her not to cry out, allllmost letting her cum then pulling away, seducing her while she's doing dishes or household chores... the list goes on and on.