I need more constructive feedback like this:

[sweetnpetite]

Truly, I do...


"Breed the white hos with nigger cock - we need more monkey babies"

from our pal, anonymous.

 

[cloudy]

ah, that's Mr. Racist-PregnancyFetish Anonymous. Isn't he just all that?

 

[kendo1]

Mm.
You must admit he has style, wit and imagination.

 

[sweetnpetite]

ah, that's Mr. Racist-PregnancyFetish Anonymous. Isn't he just all that?

what do you know? You eat other people

 

[sweetnpetite]

Mm.
You must admit he has style, wit and imagination.

I wonder if his name is Hos, and he's talking about himself?

 

[cloudy]

what do you know? You eat other people

....and you want to.

 

[Just-Legal]

I'm still really tempted to write a story (crappily) that fulfils all his desires...




... and put it in Humour and Satire.

 

[kendo1]

I'm still really tempted to write a story (crappily) that fulfils all his desires...




... and put it in Humour and Satire.

I thought you already had.

 

[Belegon]

recently I tend to get more stuff like this...

Even if it's 2 hot women isn't it still cheating?

and then the commenter goes on and on about how one of the characters is obviously so wrong for the other because by bringing in the third person into a threesome she was creating infidelity, etc., etc.


ummmm, if you're so strictly into monogamous MF sex, then why the hell are you reading and commenting on my Group Sex story? If you did not get a clue once, read the category heading again please.

*sigh*

...oh, and if I had you so empathizing and believing about what was going to eventually happen to this one fictional character? Then I must have done a better job of writing said non-existant people then you apparently want to give me credit for... Hello, McFly? *knock, knock* It is called FICTION!

/rant & threadjack

 

[LadyJeanne]

Y'all get such interesting feedback.

 

[cloudy]

recently I tend to get more stuff like this...

Even if it's 2 hot women isn't it still cheating?

and then the commenter goes on and on about how one of the characters is obviously so wrong for the other because by bringing in the third person into a threesome she was creating infidelity, etc., etc.


ummmm, if you're so strictly into monogamous MF sex, then why the hell are you reading and commenting on my Group Sex story? If you did not get a clue once, read the category heading again please.

*sigh*

...oh, and if I had you so empathizing and believing about what was going to eventually happen to this one fictional character? Then I must have done a better job of writing said non-existant people then you apparently want to give me credit for... Hello, McFly? *knock, knock* It is called FICTION.

/rant & threadjjack

You gotta love our intelligence-challenged friends. My current fave is this:

Bovine Scatology
09/13/05 By: Anonymous in The United States
This essay was written by a weak-kneed liberal who has almost no life experience to base these ideas upon. The "logic" used in this piece of trash contradicts itself between paragraphs, rendering everything moot. What a crock...

1) apparently s/he thinks he knows me. But then, why would they think I have "almost no life experience"? That's laughable, but the next part is priceless...

2) "contradicts itself between paragraphs" - is there some printing between the paragraphs that everyone can see but me? If so, what does it say? Does it have really cool messages there like "I am Paul"?

 

[impressive]

Monkey babies? (That's what I call my kids!)

 

[sweetnpetite]

....and you want to.

I forgot, I'm only an *honory* retarted canibal. You're the real thing

 

[OhMissScarlett]

I just got a PC on Saturday for my poem "House Arrest" and it said something like "Crap. Happy apple bucket walls? WTF!"

It came with a one vote, so at least my wish was fulfilled that one votes be accompanied by helpful comments on how I can improve as a poet.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I made someone cry again.

 

[BlackShanglan]

I just got a PC on Saturday for my poem "House Arrest" and it said something like "Crap. Happy apple bucket walls? WTF!"

It came with a one vote, so at least my wish was fulfilled that one votes be accompanied by helpful comments on how I can improve as a poet.

*laugh*

Ah, at least your wit needs no improvement.

 

[OhMissScarlett]

*laugh*

Ah, at least your wit needs no improvement.

I'm sure all the people I ridicule would beg to differ.

 

[sweetnpetite]

My new story is very low voted but I've gotten lots of good feedback. Not suprising given the subject matter.

what is suprising is how many have told me that it's 'well written'-- I confess, I wrote it rather quickly in one setting to fill a category. so if I can take this compliment to heart, I guess all 1st drafts aren't crap.

Maybe I'm tallented!

 

[minsue]

I made someone cry again.

So it was your giggling whinny I heard as I sniffled through Will!

 

[TxRad]

So it was your giggling whinny I heard as I sniffled through Will!

Just how many giggling whinys are there....... and whose Will....... inquiring minds need to knwo.....

 

[thebullet]

One story I wrote returned the following feedback the other day:
Too Much Shit!
I'm not ever sure what that means.
____________________________________
for another story I got:
Thiscallmotherfucker
????
____________________________________
Then I got these two opinions back to back:
1) Very well written. a great believable sex story.
2) That story was fcked up
It made me very proud.
____________________________________

 

[BlackShanglan]

So it was your giggling whinny I heard as I sniffled through Will!

Not giggling so much as ... warm happy glow. Someone else loves my two dear ones.

Just how many giggling whinys are there....... and whose Will....... inquiring minds need to knwo.....

*laugh* I think I probably am the only one capable of giggling whinnys. As for Will, he's a ... no, there's no polite way to say it. But he lives here.

Shanglan