i need help

[mavrik9475]

goodlooking guy from minneapolis is alone and looking for fun gals and maybe even the right guy

 

[OrcishBarbarian]

goodlooking guy from minneapolis is alone and looking for fun gals and maybe even the right guy

A couple strikes against you. First, you're the wrong gender to get much love on the Lit personals board...even with a well-written ad.

Second, your ad's not all that well-written. About all that any reader can tell is you're a bi male. What kind of women or men are you looking for? What do you look like? I imagine it might just make a difference to a reader whether you are 53 and white versus 21 and Asian. What kind of "fun" are you looking for?

Don't take this personally...I could write this same critique for about two-thirds of the ads that appear here. And if you're male, you're probably better off posting to Craigslist.

 

[mavrik9475]

ouch thanks for the advise though i realised after that i was kinda limited in the info department and have tried craigs but find more than half are fakes so i am here
now im 34 5'6" blonde with blue eyes 175pds and i dont have a type of person im looking for really as for fun it can be anything from sex to a movie or just a local bar i just need to get out and soon