C cazyjohn Experienced Joined Jan 31, 2006 Posts 33 Mar 27, 2006 #1 iam write a milf story i need help with it can some1 look at it
K kbate complevit Joined Dec 22, 2004 Posts 30,469 Mar 27, 2006 #2 cazyjohn said: iam write a milf story i need help with it can some1 look at it Click to expand... What do you want us to look over it with an eye toward? Editing? Suggestions? Post it in this thread if it isn't too long and use a file transfer server if it is long and post a link to either a word .doc file or a rich text file.
cazyjohn said: iam write a milf story i need help with it can some1 look at it Click to expand... What do you want us to look over it with an eye toward? Editing? Suggestions? Post it in this thread if it isn't too long and use a file transfer server if it is long and post a link to either a word .doc file or a rich text file.
