I need help with a story idea

[dirty_sumbit]

I haven't added a story on here yet. I have started a hand full of stories and finished none.
So I have an idea with the main character is futanaria/ or shemale.
At first I wanted the story to be a short short story just sex and go.
Now I'm thinking added alittle more to the story.
So my main character will really be a villain and the story will be from that pov.
Her side kick being a straight male.
anyways I have a few pages written and really not sure how to make it all come together.
I've only written stories for myself. which needless to say. Are more then likely not very good.

So I'm in hopes to find someone who is a natural writer. Who know and understands how to make a story readable.

 

[Hypoxia]

I'll give my usual advice: Play the story like a video in your mind and blog it. Write what you see happening, what the players do and say, what you feel about it as it unwinds. This gives you the setting, the characters, and the basic plot points, all the way to the ending. Then go back and fill in details, add embellishments, trim excess, etc. If you start with journal / diary entries then you know what's happening, what's going to happen; finishing the story becomes an exercise, not an endless challenge. Try it and see.

 

[MatthewVett]

Practice, practice, practice! Even if you don't think it's good, others might, and they'll probably offer feedback on it, too. Trust me, my earliest stories are even worse than my current ones. I've improved a lot!

 

[dirty_sumbit]

thank you

Thank you for the advice.

 

[MyRubiLips]

I need help with a story idea.

So I'm in hopes to find someone who is a natural writer. Who know and understands how to make a story readable.

So, did you want an editor to go over what you've written?
Advice from authors, like you've received?
Or were you going to post an actual idea? (Provided you have more to add to what you've written.)

 

[dirty_sumbit]

a little of all the above

I really need you know what I'm unsure what I need
I guess hoping someone to read what I got to see if it understandable,
maybe give some ideas of where to go
I do have about 3 pages typed. No sex scene yet. Just the understanding of sex happen
although I do plan to put sex into the story just didn't want to get to focus on typing the sex scenes yet

So for I really don't have a back story to the main two character.
Not really sure what I am doing as a writer.
really at a point of seeing if it is for me or not
am I going to be that guy with 50 short stories on his comp that no one has read

 

[dirty_sumbit]

wow

I guess your question really messed me up.

I posted just hoping to find someone who enjoys the creative part
or coming up with stories and would read what I got and ask some
question give some suggestions

but I ended up wondering what I am doing