i need contrustive critisism

[soverysexxx]

so i have some peoms submitted. i have never gotten any feed back. i never get constuctive critisim and i would like to recive some? i dunno.. it would be cool thanks. post it here if you read them. i think i need to change my style a bit im just not sure.

 

[soverysexxx]

crap i posted this in the wrong spot. i didnt see feedback. : / sorrryyy

 

[Safe_Bet]

You should post/link to the poems you want to have critiqued and explain exactly what kind/how much critique you are looking for (opinion, review, line by line parsing, etc.). There are a lot of really excellent poets here that would be happy to read and comment.

 

[Epmd607]

You only posted two poems? I read the ones on your profile. For me it's not enough information, I'd say post like four or five more. A quick note, your double spacing between the lines is distracting.

 

[annaswirls]

I have also found that you will get more feedback after you leave some for others. It is a simple gesture that shows you are interested in interaction with other writers. We also have a Poetry In Progress Thread in the Poetry Feedback and Discussion area. You can always post your work there and see what happens. Leaving comments on other poet's work there is also a good way to show people that you are interested in interacting with them in a critical way.

Good luck and welcome!

 

[soverysexxx]

thank you!