I'm working on a story and I'm worried. I'm thirteen pages in and am just getting to the start of the story. The first thirteen pages set up the story and background and relationships and I feel that it's important to have that backstory, actually integral, but I'm doing a hell of a lot of telling instead of showing and am afraid that people will not read that far to get to the meat of the story.
Anyone want to do a read through and give me their opinions?
Anyone want to do a read through and give me their opinions?
