I need a little help

[destinie21]

I"m working on part two of an incest story Raine and Sheri in which two sisters sleep together, I tried hard to keep the plot and characters from eing cliche, now as I work on part two I wonder if I should at some point bring in other memebers of the family (I was going to bring in the mother or the yet unmentioned aunt) But I want to know if that would just be the usual and ditract from the story. (BTW if I do bring in the mother and or the aunt it won't be until later because I like to build the characters)

Any advice would be welcome.

 

[BlackSnake]

Destinie,

What if you try to keep the sister's affair between them, but in doing so the sisters would have to misdirect other's to keep them from finding out, so that the love affair could continue?

Say that the Aunt becomes suspicious, having a love for women she recognizes the signs. Instead of allowing the Aunt to join in the party one of the sisters does the Aunt to through her off.

 

[destinie21]

Destinie,

What if you try to keep the sister's affair between them, but in doing so the sisters would have to misdirect other's to keep them from finding out, so that the love affair could continue?

Say that the Aunt becomes suspicious, having a love for women she recognizes the signs. Instead of allowing the Aunt to join in the party one of the sisters does the Aunt to through her off.

lol we're on the same page lol already had that as an idea cuz it would be to trite to have them both do her. I also thought maybe

a) the aunt blackmails both sisters but niether has any idea
all the while she's having an affair with the girls father.

b) Aunt blackmails one of the girls but tells their mother anyway since mother and aunt have been doing the dirty for years (it's the mothers sister in law not blood sis) anyway mom wants in both woman devise a blackmail type plan to fuck the girls

 

[BlackSnake]

lol we're on the same page lol already had that as an idea cuz it would be to trite to have them both do her. I also thought maybe

a) the aunt blackmails both sisters but niether has any idea
all the while she's having an affair with the girls father.

b) Aunt blackmails one of the girls but tells their mother anyway since mother and aunt have been doing the dirty for years (it's the mothers sister in law not blood sis) anyway mom wants in both woman devise a blackmail type plan to fuck the girls

I like it girl-girl style. Of course, kept the father happy and thinking that he has one up, because he is getting plenty from his wife, sister, and both his daughters, but they all know about him and he believes that none of them know.

Aunt and mother is a go one. As the Aunt has one sister, with the sister thinking that she is throwing the sister off track. The setup by the Aunt is to allow the mother to watch without the one sister knowing. The Aunt then goes after the other sister again with only the mother's knowledge.

The Aunt can then setup one sister at a time with their mother. Once the mother has a threesome with her daughter's separately, then there is the foursome.

In the aftermath, they could joke about they are able to keep the father completely unaware.

Damn girl! You got me going on this one. I can wait to she what you decide.

 

[sirhugs]

I like it girl-girl style. Of course, kept the father happy and thinking that he has one up, because he is getting plenty from his wife, sister, and both his daughters, but they all know about him and he believes that none of them know.

Aunt and mother is a go one. As the Aunt has one sister, with the sister thinking that she is throwing the sister off track. The setup by the Aunt is to allow the mother to watch without the one sister knowing. The Aunt then goes after the other sister again with only the mother's knowledge.

The Aunt can then setup one sister at a time with their mother. Once the mother has a threesome with her daughter's separately, then there is the foursome.

In the aftermath, they could joke about they are able to keep the father completely unaware.

Damn girl! You got me going on this one. I can wait to she what you decide.

rather than aunt seduce the sisters separately, I se her as the "teacher", instructing them together. Mom, already into aunty, overhears or stunbles upon the threesome. watches then joins in.

 

[miss_honeypot]

I'd keep it as being just the sister-sister relationship. I'm extremely touch and go when it comes to the incest category. Normally, if two family members are maintaining an incestual relationship and another (or multiple) family member joins in on the action, i'll simply stop reading. Most of the time it's just totally unrealistic, and if nothing else a lack of realism will instantly make me stop reading a story.

To begin with...a relationship between two family members is pretty hard to make seem realistic, adding more candles to the cake just bulks it up unnecessarily.

If your characters are interesting and strong enough, you don't need to add in other characters (in the sexual context) to make it seem more thrilling.

On the whole: write the story how it's meant to be written. Your characters will usually dictate where they should go and how they get there. If adding another family member in seems like the right thing, then do so, but if it feels unnecessary or strained, don't hesitate in just keeping it with the two sisters.

 

[BlackSnake]

I'd keep it as being just the sister-sister relationship. I'm extremely touch and go when it comes to the incest category. Normally, if two family members are maintaining an incestual relationship and another (or multiple) family member joins in on the action, i'll simply stop reading. Most of the time it's just totally unrealistic, and if nothing else a lack of realism will instantly make me stop reading a story.

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While I agree that the sister-sister relationship is special. I can really get into the aunt-mother relationship being introduced. It's a repeat of the cycle. Only thing is that the Aunt is the husband's sister. Adding more characters gives them real life. It allows them to be seen outside their bubble.

 

[sirhugs]

an interesting variation might be if the two senior sisters ( mom n aunt ) are having sex in one room as the younger sisters explore each other in their roo, with the story intercutting between the paralllel scenes. Have it end ( at least ch 1) with one of Aunt or Mom saying to the other " too bad the girls can't learn like we did." Of course, one of the younger sisters is saying " Too bad Mom and Aunty don't know what they're missing."

 

[BlackSnake]

Interesting to have the Aunt-Mom and sister-sister to learn of each other's love affair.

 

[sirhugs]

Interesting to have the Aunt-Mom and sister-sister to learn of each other's love affair.

the potential ch 2.....

 

[BlackSnake]

Destinie, are you game for this?

 

[destinie21]

Thanks for your help boys and girls
Part two of Raine&Sheri is up, and I hope you like where I took it.
Part three is in the works so stay tuned to see your ideas written in.

Raine&Sheri 2


BTW snake I'm always up for it.

 

[PhilLusty]

my opinion

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b) Aunt blackmails one of the girls but tells their mother anyway since mother and aunt have been doing the dirty for years (it's the mothers sister in law not blood sis) anyway mom wants in both woman devise a blackmail type plan to fuck the girls [/B][/QUOTE]


edited, cuz i didnt pay attention to the other posts....and didnt look at the date, so since your done with chapter 2 i would be to late

look forward to reading them soon

PHIL

 

[destinie21]

Re: my opinion

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b) Aunt blackmails one of the girls but tells their mother anyway since mother and aunt have been doing the dirty for years (it's the mothers sister in law not blood sis) anyway mom wants in both woman devise a blackmail type plan to fuck the girls

edited, cuz i didnt pay attention to the other posts....and didnt look at the date, so since your done with chapter 2 i would be to late

look forward to reading them soon

PHIL [/B][/QUOTE]

lol it's never to late phil, I tend to write series so you may just see your idea pop up yet.

 

[ErosKeys]

keep it in the family.....

the sisters are interupted one day by twin boys at teh frotn door .... they have come to find their real mom -- the sisters mom -- who gave up the twin boys for adoption when in teen child birth. The posibilities for another 2-3 chapters are waiting to be had..........