I need a little favor...

[HSWriter]

Hey there guys,

HSWriter here... yes, I am still alive and kicking... but now I have a problem... Since I wrote the first installment of "The Tour" way back in '99, I have recieved tons of emails of feedback from readers who either said they enjoyed it, or thought it needed some work. With every installment since then, this has been the case, lots of good feedback. Now, since posting the 7th and final installment of "The Tour", I am yet to see any feedback for it .. so, if anyone has read it, or would like to read it (http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=36955), I would appreciate a little feedback either here, or in my email (HSWriter@prodigy.net).. thanks a lot guys, I hope to hear from you soon..

HSWriter

 

[Chantal Marchon]

feedback

I sent you feedback from directly from the story. I put my name on it though.

Have a great day!

 

[Hudson]

Hi I liked your story I did not read the other chapters so some of my comments may not be relevant.
I thought that you jumped into the sex scenes to quickly without perhaps giving the reader a tease, these are beautiful women and although most people would know what they looked like and how they perform, I would have liked a little more description of each one, for example "Britney always turned me on when she was on stage her breasts squeezed tightly into that tiny bra, as she teased the audience with her sensuality , I knew it was all for me" etc.

Also there are a couple of typo's missed out "I" in the start of story this is not critical would have been missed on your read through.

All in all a good story.
Cheers