I made the cut!

[Boota]

My first story is up and I am pretty excited about it! Now I can be in the Author's Hangout section and mean it. LOL.


http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=116250


That's where it's at if anyone wants to check it out. I'd love to hear your comments, good or bad. It's all about being a better writer, so I can take the criticism.

Now, back to the stories with me! There is so much here!

 

[Wills]

Hey Boota

Well done, far be it from me to comment, I haven't got anything up as of yet. I have sent you my thoughts on a PM.

Will's

 

[Guest]

Hi Boota, congrats on your first story at Lit, and what a way to start!

It's a very well written highly sensual piece of erotica. I've sent you more feedback via email.

That was a great story to start my day with, thanks.

Lou

 

[OldnotDead]

Hello, Boota,

I'll just quickly echo what Lou said. Good first story.

 

[sweet T]

Congratulations! Welcome to the Board!

 

[whispering_surrender]

Welcome

My two cents have been deposited into your feedback email.

*smiles*

Whisper

 

[Boota]

Thank you all for the feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed my story. As soon as I can get the time to do it,. I have another idea ready and I'm chomping at the bit to get it out there.

Thanks again.