I.L.L.ness

[latinlyric]

I.L.Lness

Droplets of essence drizzle down my furrowed brow
Anticipation of respect which fizzles, murmuring to the crowd
Legs quake with furvor and intensity in each step that I take
Unrelenting peers who reveal all my fears, exposing lucid mistakes i make
Revelations that connect to mindframes of scripture
Investment of facts direct relapses in wide-screen picture
Studies in which brain matter is tattered with mystery
Ignorance is delightful when miscriants are spiteful in misery
Spiritual miracles grace my presence and strengthen souless hunger
Intelligence affects those which defy my complex textual wonders
Losses never cease to sweep scribes off thier feet with quickness'
Laughing ghastly creases fade discreetly as speeches increase in thickness
Suspence ebbs forth as whispers from hearkened courage of pain
Irrelevance is evidence of shivers down my back leaving tracks of trains
Nevertheless a writer never stresses or tugs his tresses
Sinfully snatching batches of matches to burn all hateful messes

This was a piece that i thought of and wrote. peace and respect.

 

[latinlyric]

**UPPIN' THIS THREAD**

Im uppin this thread, well..just because..lol

 

[HomerPindar]

Hi latinlyric,

If you wanted a critique on your posted poem here, perhaps before submitting it, then you should mention that in the thread opening so folks know what your looking for.

If you're upping it just to bring attention to it...um, ok.

HomerPindar