I just wrote my first erotica!!!

[kaitlyn_sun]

ok! the last editor sent me their copy, and I applied their advice and submitted it... and it's up!

our sort-of first date

PLEASE be nice when you review it!!!!! this is my first time, and I'm very fragile!

#Imnotactuallyfragile #gototown

 

[jennifer036]

ok! the last editor sent me their copy, and I applied their advice and submitted it... and it's up!

our sort-of first date

PLEASE be nice when you review it!!!!! this is my first time, and I'm very fragile!

#Imnotactuallyfragile #gototown

very nice.

 

[NightOfPassion2]

very nice.

agree.

 

[Bert_Fegg]

ok! the last editor sent me their copy, and I applied their advice and submitted it... and it's up!

our sort-of first date

PLEASE be nice when you review it!!!!! this is my first time, and I'm very fragile!

#Imnotactuallyfragile #gototown

If you used any of my edits I didn't see them. Still It just goes to show how well written it was to start with. Excellent work

 

[kaitlyn_sun]

If you used any of my edits I didn't see them. Still It just goes to show how well written it was to start with. Excellent work

I wish I could tell you whose edits I used and whose I didn't... I compiled them all together into one big mass and then cherry picked it. however much of your advice I used, though, I'm really grateful for your help! it's definitely a better story for your input!

 

[Bert_Fegg]

I wish I could tell you whose edits I used and whose I didn't... I compiled them all together into one big mass and then cherry picked it. however much of your advice I used, though, I'm really grateful for your help! it's definitely a better story for your input!

I'm glad that you think so - but seriously - there's nothing in it that I suggested - which goes to show how well it was written to begin with. All the credit is yours