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geronimo_appleby

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anon feedback via email. it made my day.

go on, bud, give it your best: :D


email 1:


I can't understand your thinking. I was a real soldier , an airborne Ranger in Korea. I would not have watched. I would have acted. I would have kicked the hell out of the guy's and gave the wife her walking papers in what ever she was wearing. But you just wanted to write some porn Right? so you had hin crouch there like an idiot watching. If you are going to write a story then use some brains, which I doubt you have> I really think that you could have had him pull on his pud which must have been hard as nails...I don't want to get nasty but you are a wimp peice of shit

email 2:

Man...er wimp. I knew that you were a bunch of shit. You talk the talk but you walk like a little faggot panty waist. You haven't even got the courage to carry through. You didn't finish the story because you had already came ( little watery drops) by just thinking of the REVENGE. You suck...hey maybe you could get even by having them fuck your butt and suck them off with the wife. She's the only one with balls in the story cause your hero just didn't have any..of course I know this is because it..( see i can't even call it a man) IT comes out of that sewer you call a mind. Put it better that toilet that ypou call a mind. If you are so good at revenge then perhaps I should rape and kill your grandmother...you wouldn't do shit to me anyway. Hell you'ld probably want to suck my cock but i don't creeps put his slimy mouth on my jewels.

email3 :

Hey I just got stoned and I had a picture in my head of Geronimo appleby...He is dressed in a tutu and fihk net stockings with five inch pumps. He is piroting and had a water pistol in his hand. He goes shoots an imaginary villiam from his stories and he flaps his wrist b, rel fairy like, and says with a lisp. By the way he has lipstick on and he is crushing a grape and looking real mean. HE HE HE HE$..well as mean as a faggot can, and says there ,,,take that you dirty rotten you old nasty man you mansey,,,
 
So articulate! So uber intelligent! :rolleyes:

Why is it that the comments in the LW category always seem to come from third graders who haven't yet mastered the art of the complete sentence, punctuation or spelling? LOL.

How proud you must be to have such coherent and intelligent readers.
 
what concerns me most is email 3.

i mean, how does he know me so well? :eek: all pretty accurate ... except for the water pistol.
 
anon feedback via email. it made my day.

go on, bud, give it your best: :D


email 1:


I can't understand your thinking. I was a real soldier , an airborne Ranger in Korea. I would not have watched. I would have acted. I would have kicked the hell out of the guy's and gave the wife her walking papers in what ever she was wearing. But you just wanted to write some porn Right? so you had hin crouch there like an idiot watching. If you are going to write a story then use some brains, which I doubt you have> I really think that you could have had him pull on his pud which must have been hard as nails...I don't want to get nasty but you are a wimp peice of shit

email 2:

Man...er wimp. I knew that you were a bunch of shit. You talk the talk but you walk like a little faggot panty waist. You haven't even got the courage to carry through. You didn't finish the story because you had already came ( little watery drops) by just thinking of the REVENGE. You suck...hey maybe you could get even by having them fuck your butt and suck them off with the wife. She's the only one with balls in the story cause your hero just didn't have any..of course I know this is because it..( see i can't even call it a man) IT comes out of that sewer you call a mind. Put it better that toilet that ypou call a mind. If you are so good at revenge then perhaps I should rape and kill your grandmother...you wouldn't do shit to me anyway. Hell you'ld probably want to suck my cock but i don't creeps put his slimy mouth on my jewels.

email3 :

Hey I just got stoned and I had a picture in my head of Geronimo appleby...He is dressed in a tutu and fihk net stockings with five inch pumps. He is piroting and had a water pistol in his hand. He goes shoots an imaginary villiam from his stories and he flaps his wrist b, rel fairy like, and says with a lisp. By the way he has lipstick on and he is crushing a grape and looking real mean. HE HE HE HE$..well as mean as a faggot can, and says there ,,,take that you dirty rotten you old nasty man you mansey,,,

I dunno... email 3.... My money is on the luv dude... can't quite put my finger on it yanno?? :D
 
At least you get feedback, sweetie.....;)

(note to self: pick up GA's spare tutu from the dry cleaners!)
 
I'm gonna go with door # 3, I think. Those typos really do it for me.

Oh, and I've got some grapes in the fridge if you want. ;)
 
Holy shit. That made my night. There is no way that guy wasn't totally plastered.

Good grief!! I still can't believe it. I want to read it again. Thanks so much for posting. Simply astonishing.

It was like he was using some type of secretary program that types as he speaks. It was terrible. And wonderful!

You rock.
 
Everyone should be as cool and calm as you when it comes to negative feedback. If only I could get some of that thick skin...;-).
 
Trolls...

i think maybe i live in a dream world where it doesnt make sense that people take time out of there days to write things that are just gonna bring another person down. hmmmm....:-/

Of course it makes sense! One of the basic tenets of insecurity is "I can't feel good unless I make you feel bad". Simple as that. If everyone who receives unstructured vitriolic senseless critcism could just remember that, the problem would just fizzle out (or at least decrease dramatically) because there'd be no more troll-feeding...!

Oh -- I just re-read your comment and I notice I hadn't absorbed the first part of your comment. Well maybe I'm saying the same thing then: let's all ignore the insecure dickwads, and maybe they'll go away!
 
LOLLL Oh man... what I freak! I heard somewhere that in Quebec, Canada, they had made a movie about an abusive step-mother in the '40s or '50s and the actress who played the step-mother would get tossed stones and be pushed and punched when she'd walk the streets because people couldn't differentiate reality from fiction (although the movie was based on a true story).

We haven't heard of such cases since... until now. This guy seriously needs to relax.

And Alittlecloser69, criticism is a great thing and you shouldn't dismiss it or feel attacked. However, there's a classy way of criticizing a story and most people here seem to lack that class. Criticism can be really helpful, but you just have to know what criticism is good criticism and what criticism isn't.

I read your story and thought it to be really good. One of the better ones I've read. The only 'icky' part is your use of "than" rather than "then". lol

But seriously, the 3rd e-mail is really the best, I conquer.
 
i think maybe i live in a dream world where it doesnt make sense that people take time out of there days to write things that are just gonna bring another person down. hmmmm....:-/

Unfortunately, lassie, you do. =\ Fortunately, there are people around here who will also do their best to bring others up instead.

(And thank God. The dumber a person is, the more he thinks he knows anything.)

(...Hmm, it takes one to know one, doesn't it... :eek:)
 
OMG! I've just read this. It's hard to know if you should laugh or cry, but putting it here shows how mixed up that guy really is!
 
Not alone

Ah thank god someone else is getting weird ass responses...I thought it was just me. What is it about the Loving Wives section? It clearly sends some people bat-shit crazy.
 
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