I have put line break for every line and got this error

[EmperorN3R0]

My story got sent back. This time I have put line breaks for everyline thinking I won't get any errors and get sent back. But My story got sent back with this

"Status
Sent back
Important Message About Your Submission
Dear Writer,

Thank you for your submission to Literotica. We appreciate the time and effort you've taken to write a story and submit it to our site . However, we've found that we cannot post your submission in its current form. The checklist below may help you in re-examining your manuscript.

Please fix the formatting of your dialogue. The essay "How to Make Characters Talk" in our Writer's Resources section has more information on the formatting of dialogue if you have further questions: https://www.literotica.com/s/how-to-make-characters-talk
Please feel free to re-submit the story after a Volunteer Editor has examined it, or after you've made revisions. You can find a list of Volunteer Editors here.

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Thanks for your time, and look forward to reading you again"

then i got a doubt is it because of the line breaks or how i wrote. ⬇⬇⬇ below is a scene from my story. Is it the line breaks or the way I wrote if anyone know kindly tell what to change

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One night, a guy named Mark DMs me, praising my "pecs" and "arms."

Our chat turns sexual, he seems like he's gay because he was constantly asking for my dick pics with every message.

I'm not gay, but I did end up sending them.

"Have you ever done anything wild?" he asks.

"Nope, I'm a virgin," I admitted, "mostly into girls." I said that so he doesn't send dick pics.

The next day, the chat dives into taboo talk and he sends a nude photo of a woman, then flooding with the chat with that womans pics, atleast 50 pics, big boobs and ass and He kept sending me pics then he sent pics of him fucking her.

My dick got hard instantly.

"Who's that?" I typed.

"That's my mom," he replied.

"Oh, okay," but I think, it must be some AI. I've seen plenty of pics like that on the internet and plenty of stories like that on the forum.

He spills how he seduced her with late-night talks and stolen touches.

Though this guy is lying, he's lying very well, his story with the picture got me very hard.
"
Thanks.

 

[ElectricBlue]

My story got sent back. This time I have put line breaks for everyline thinking I won't get any errors and get sent back. But My story got sent back with this

then i got a doubt is it because of the line breaks or how i wrote. ⬇⬇⬇ below is a scene from my story. Is it the line breaks or the way I wrote if anyone know kindly tell what to change

You need to think about paragraphs more. You're doing a return at the end of each sentence, which gives your text a really choppy feel. Read other stories to check out how other writers construct their narrative. You'll find most stories mix up paragraph lengths - but you won't find many with only single sentence paragraphs.