I have an idea I need help with

[Johnboy9]

I like to write forced crossed dressing/transvestite stories which have all usually dealt with shy, unassertive guys - either boyfriends or brothers - of girls who fall victim to the girls' deviant plans for them. I was attempting to write a similar story when it suddenly occurred to me why not make the male character an arrogant, sort of bully type of guy.

My men have always looked a bit effeminate, always standing some2 or 3 inches shorter than their female counterpart and already having really long hair, making it easier for the girls to put themselves into a more dominant, in-your-face position over their hapless sissies. Most writers of this genre draw their male characters out the same as it makes it easier to feminize them, giving them hair ready-made for curling and a body size that will fit into any panties or dress close-by in which to force the guy to wear being their hand-me-downs are nearly the same size and because they are close-by.

But I suddenly got to thinking about writing such a forced femme story using a male character who starts out in a superior position, maybe either arrogant or a bully or even a little bit bigger or a lot bigger, who slips up somehow and suddenly finds himself submissive to the girl - a girl either a girlfriend - or a girl he keeps trying to make a girlfriend, or a sister, or a mother and then sister. Then, after all this time lording it over her it might make a better story instead of just a story of simply taking over the life of a wimp and turning him into a sissy wimp or effeminate wimp.

First, I'd like an opinion on that thought.

My second problem is that having for years written the one way, I have no idea how to write arrogant bullyish characters. If anybody here can suggest stories here where the bully gets taken down in humiliation I would appreciate it. I seem only to find stories about bullys who go on tormenting the kids they bullied all their lives with no payback. Thanks for any help you can offer. Somebody suggested blackmail which I think is a terrific idea, but I just need to get my arrogant character from pg.1, line1 to pg. whatever, start of blackmail. I can do the rest, I'm sure. If anyone can offer any kind of help, I'd be most gracious. Thanks.

 

[rjordan]

But I suddenly got to thinking about writing such a forced femme story using a male character who starts out in a superior position, maybe either arrogant or a bully or even a little bit bigger or a lot bigger, who slips up somehow and suddenly finds himself submissive to the girl - a girl either a girlfriend - or a girl he keeps trying to make a girlfriend, or a sister, or a mother and then sister. Then, after all this time lording it over her it might make a better story instead of just a story of simply taking over the life of a wimp and turning him into a sissy wimp or effeminate wimp.

First, I'd like an opinion on that thought.

I don't have any experience with femme stories, but I think a story about turning or even trying to turn a big arrogant bully would be more interesting with more conflict and emotions than turning an already effeminate guy into a more effeminate guy. Stories are about conflict and your idea would involve a lot of conflict.

My second problem is that having for years written the one way, I have no idea how to write arrogant bullyish characters.

Time for a little role play with yourself. I don't know you, but what would your reaction be to a girlfriend or wife trying to make you into a "sissy/effeminate wimp". I understand that you write those kind of characters, but if you yourself wouldn't like it, you could start with your own reactions.

If you need more, pick a macho actor from the movies. You asked for written characters, but most of us probably have more vivid images of movie characters to easily draw from.

How would a Jack Nicholson character act if a woman tried that on him? Clint Eastwood. Mel Gibson. Harrison Ford. Robert de Niro. Robert Duvall. Dennis Hopper. Danny deVito! Joe Pesci. Role play in your mind as any of those guys and try to imagine what they'd have to say about it. I think some interesting dialog would occur to you almost immediately. In fact, I'm going to try it myself with Danny deVito as Louie La Palma from Taxi. ha ha

Blackmail is the only thing that occurs to me as well that would allow a woman to dress any of those guys up in women's clothes.

rj

 

[Johnboy9]

Taking a little time out for role play? Ouch!

I don't have any experience with femme stories, but I think a story about turning or even trying to turn a big arrogant bully would be more interesting with more conflict and emotions than turning an already effeminate guy into a more effeminate guy. Stories are about conflict and your idea would involve a lot of conflict.



[Time for a little role play with yourself. I don't know you, but what would your reaction be to a girlfriend or wife trying to make you into a "sissy/effeminate wimp". I understand that you write those kind of characters, but if you yourself wouldn't like it, you could start with your own reactions.

If you need more, pick a macho actor from the movies. You asked for written characters, but most of us probably have more vivid images of movie characters to easily draw from.

How would a Jack Nicholson character act if a woman tried that on him? Clint Eastwood. Mel Gibson. Harrison Ford. Robert de Niro. Robert Duvall. Dennis Hopper. Danny deVito! Joe Pesci. Role play in your mind as any of those guys and try to imagine what they'd have to say about it. I think some interesting dialog would occur to you almost immediately. In fact, I'm going to try it myself with Danny deVito as Louie La Palma from Taxi. ha ha

Blackmail is the only thing that occurs to me as well that would allow a woman to dress any of those guys up in women's clothes.]

rj

I try this, you know, but have such a hard problem with it. Due to a medical condition in high school I ended up unknowingly peeing in my pants and then losing my memory after the fact. If it hadn't been for the stain in my pants afterwards I'd never have remembered or believed it really happened - oh yeah, and except for all the teasing I got for it. Because of that I developed such a thick skin I am so nearly impervious to most attempts of blackmail or intimidation. What writers use now to scare their characters into submission nowadays in their stories to try and get them to wear girly clothes, if they tried that on me I would say yeah, right...boo to you too! because I've been through so much already.

It's like when I was 9 years old I was having a fight with a kid who lived across the street from me. I ended up accidently breaking a window in their house and he threatened to tell my parents. Ha! I ran home and told my mother before he had a chance. That's how I've always treated threats and ultimatums so it's hard to write a story using them.

There are only some things I can imagine that could coerce me into doing such things - the threat of being shot in the kneecaps or hammered on the toes or kneecaps rather than killed if I didn't dress up would be enough to get me to dress up, for example.

 

[robertreams]

I like to write forced crossed dressing/transvestite stories which have all usually dealt with shy, unassertive guys - either boyfriends or brothers - of girls who fall victim to the girls' deviant plans for them. I was attempting to write a similar story when it suddenly occurred to me why not make the male character an arrogant, sort of bully type of guy.

My men have always looked a bit effeminate, always standing some2 or 3 inches shorter than their female counterpart making it easier for the girls to put themselves into a more dominant, in-your-face position over their hapless sissies. Most writers of this genre do the same as it makes it easier to quickly find panties and a dress to force the guy to wear as their hand-me-downs are very close to the same size.

But I suddenly got to thinking about writing such a forced femme story using a male character who starts out in a superior position, maybe either arrogant or a bully or even a little bit bigger or a lot bigger, who slips up somehow and suddenly finds himself submissive to the girl - a girl either a girlfriend - or a girl he keeps trying to make a girlfriend, or a sister, or a mother and then sister. Then, after all this time lording it over her it might make a better story instead of just a story of simply taking over the life of a wimp and turning him into a sissy wimp or effeminate wimp.

First, I'd like an opinion on that thought.

My second problem is that having for years written the one way, I have no idea how to write arrogant bullyish characters. If anybody here can suggest stories here where the bully gets taken down in humiliation I would appreciate it. I seem only to find stories about bullys who go on tormenting the kids they bullied all their lives with no payback. Thanks for any help you can offer. Somebody suggested blackmail which I think is a terrific idea, but I just need to get my arrogant character from pg.1, line1 to pg. whatever, start of blackmail. I can do the rest, I'm sure. If anyone can offer any kind of help, I'd be most gracious. Thanks.

In real life, I have experienced, it is often the powerful man: the general, the president, he big time preacher, the head of the movie studio, the CEO, etc., who consciously or subconsciously desires to be dominated. So no your proposal is far from ridiculous. It is also said that a true dom can look in a crowd and tell who the subs are, even if they don't know it themselves. '

So maybe our young woman s at a conference from work. She sees something in the lead speaker, general, etc, so she must design her web in such a way to pull him in, etc.

 

[Ephare]

I am so nearly impervious to most attempts of blackmail or intimidation.
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There are only some things I can imagine that could coerce me into doing such things - the threat of being shot in the kneecaps or hammered on the toes or kneecaps rather than killed if I didn't dress up would be enough to get me to dress up, for example.

You can use this to your advantage in writing a believable aggressive/dominant character who gets blackmailed. Since you consider yourself difficult to blackmail, if you try and imagine something that would ACTUALLY work on you, that's great material for writing believable characters. What else would work--anything more psychological? What if the woman were really wealthy and offering to give (or threatening to withhold) a huge sum of money to some cause that was really important to the main character, for example.