I have added two new poem to my repetoir.

[Ravenloft]

And would like some feed back.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=428

If anyone would be so willing.

 

[Ravenloft]

know this... As a babe we are born and with wisdom we die.

 

[lovetoread]

I read an voted on all of your poems,could you tell me which ones were new?

 

[Ravenloft]

Thank you LTR, again, that was very kind of you.

The two new ones are:

My Lover's Hands.

And

Sailor in the Void.

 

[Tyrael]

Yes the My Lover's Hands was nice.

 

[Ravenloft]

*Bowing* Thank you, that was ment to be dedicated to Honey_B though, some how it didn't show up.

 

[Starfish]

I read My lover's hand aloud, and I have to say that it flowed so beautifully.

I think you should make it an audio submission.

Totally fantastic!

So truly about love.


(yes, I voted)

 

[Ravenloft]

*Smiling* Thank you StarFish, some of the best comments I have heard yet.

I need to get batteries for the mic again, and perhaps I will read it as an audio.

 

[Ravenloft]

*Bump*

 

[Ravenloft]

*Bump*

AGAIN!

 

[Ravenloft]

Aaaaand again!

 

[Guest]

*applause*

you write beautifully...... and the inspiration to write such things must have been great

 

[Ravenloft]

*bowing*

Thank you madam Jaded, you are truly kind.

I still need to get batteries for my mic... Heh.