I have a Story

[Twistedxj2004]

Nevermind....

 

[Fantasies_only]

You should post here:
http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=14
That way you can get your opinions, leaving this forum story free.
Now if you have elements of a story you would like people to put together or have an unfinished story and can't think of anything else, that's different, but this forum is mainly for story ideas as the name implies.

 

[mjl2010]

First of all, edit your post. Go through that story and make each paragraph between six and ten screen lines long. Don't worry too much about where you break them, just break them up. The way it is, it's very hard to read. We need that white space please.

Once thats done, I'll be glad to read your story IDEA and let you know what I think.

MJL

 

[Twistedxj2004]

First of all, edit your post. Go through that story and make each paragraph between six and ten screen lines long. Don't worry too much about where you break them, just break them up. The way it is, it's very hard to read. We need that white space please.

Once thats done, I'll be glad to read your story IDEA and let you know what I think.

MJL

Thank you for your input, but seem that I just post in the wrong place all the time.