I have a solid beginning and now I'm STUCK! (Mother/Son)

[Oedipus_Dreams]

I figured I'd start here because I don't even know which forum to post this under... Editors, Authors, Ideas etc.

I have a 5000 word start to a story I was super excited for. The characters felt fresh and original and the dialogue was sexy. Now I've hit a wall.

Has anyone here ever asked for an incomplete story to be read... In hopes of some plot/pace feedback. I don't need a grammar or spelling check... yet lol... I need some constructive feedback on the actual progression.

Anyone here write or primarily read incest erotica that has any input. Is it odd for me to look for input before I'm finished? Am I better off posting this elsewhere?

Thank you either way,

Love you Literoticans

 

[Rustyoznail]

I figured I'd start here because I don't even know which forum to post this under... Editors, Authors, Ideas etc.

I have a 5000 word start to a story I was super excited for. The characters felt fresh and original and the dialogue was sexy. Now I've hit a wall.

Has anyone here ever asked for an incomplete story to be read... In hopes of some plot/pace feedback. I don't need a grammar or spelling check... yet lol... I need some constructive feedback on the actual progression.

Anyone here write or primarily read incest erotica that has any input. Is it odd for me to look for input before I'm finished? Am I better off posting this elsewhere?

Thank you either way,

Love you Literoticans

I've done a few, and been in the same position myself. I guess you've done the usual things - work out the ending, try writing something else, play table tennis... Anyway, flick me a pm. I'm happy to have a look.