I have a few ideas that I haven't completed

[dirty_sumbit]

One idea I started and haven't really got any where on (for a few different reasons) is a couple being controlled by a Mistress.

My first plan (which is what I started) was to have the male cheating with a women who is about to take things up. She is a sex addict and bi. Once she finds out he is submissive or willing to be controlled she decided to take ownership..

Anyways there is more ideas for different stories.
but this is one I wish to see completed. I haven't seen this story on here although I'm sure its here.

Thanks for any feedback or if someone knows where to find this story all ready
I would love to read it
Dirty

 

[Sean Renaud]

Honestly I'm not sure such a story does exist on here. Sure given the hundreds of thousands of stories that do exist you'd think something that seemingly basic would exist but Femdom is fairly rare to begin with as is cheating husbands.

Basically it's like your asking for a story about a super hero with two living parents. You'd think that would be common but heroes with living parents are roughly about as common as Disney Princesses with live mothers. (No seriously, I bet you can't name one off the top of your head.)

This idea probably needs a little fleshing out though. A cheating story is only important if we know something about why the guy is cheating and a little about his wife. It makes him either a sympathetic character (is she a bitch? Is he not having sex as often as he'd like. We can banter back and forth forever about if having sex is a "right" as a married person but there are enough readers who would say if you aren't satisfied in your marriage that cheating is if not accpetable certainly understandable) or is he just a piece of shit and while she's waiting at home taking care of his kids he's too tired to take care of her because he's bending his secretary over the desk at closing? These are vastly different stories.

How far is she taking her domination and why? Is she jsut turned on by the idea or she trying to teach him some kind of lesson?

If she's just getting off on it you may be better off just giving him some kind of sensitive job. I can easily buy that the CEO of Disney didn't want it getting out that he had pictures taken of him with girls dressed as various princesses doing unmentionalble things and assuming the woman is attractive enough that "Oh no, I have to lick your boots and call you mistress in exchange for you not getting my fired from my seven digit income. You probably could have just asked nicely you know."

I mention this because I hate loose ends and having too many movign parts tends to create them. So anything that isn't important to the story at the moment probably shouldn't be mentioned. If his job isn't important to the story all that's important is that he has enough income to maintain his lifestyle. If his wife isn't a factor in the story he shouldn't have one or the only mention of her should be that he has a wedding ring and then just move along.

 

[dirty_sumbit]

thank you for your advice

Thanks for trying to offer up some helpful tips into making the story happen.
So I have not posted a story on here as of yet (Mainly because of being new to writing).
Again thank you for your help. I agree with you my back story is lacking. I'm glad I haven't
posted the story. Only to have to edit it again and again

 

[Sean Renaud]

Don't stress to much over perfection either. Eventually you have to let others read what you've got just to see where you actually need to improve.

Also not everybody really agrees with me that you should cut everything that isn't important.