I have 9 poems up now, And I could really use some feedback

seasparks

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Please be honest. If you like it, or don't like it. Tell me either way.
And let me know what I need to do to improve future works,
Thanks
 
Sheesh, can I be really biased here?

I love them all!!!! (I'll let you guess which is my fave) ;-)
 
Thank you to all who answered my request for feedback.

Especially twelve to one
I reread the poems with a fresh eye, keeping in mind the feedback that I had received.
And I cam away with a whole new insight.
Thanks again!
I hope that my next efforts will be much improved!
 
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