I got some great stories but I need help

[mikey2much]

Hi guys,

I am seeking a person to work with me on stories, I will do the same for them if they would like. I want someone who is not too busy to be able to read a story and offer opinions that I can trust. I think this person should have a degree of patience that would put a monk to shame. A feel for the written word that lets it sound like a lover’s whisper in his/her ear. Someone who knows the mechanics involved in putting a story to the paper in such a way that it comes back to life when eyes scan over it.

I think that I have some stories that people would enjoy hearing, but I need help in proofreading and editing. I am not asking for expert help, although a bit of knowledge couldn’t hurt, Mostly I need fresh eyes that will see the words that are on the page and not be deceived by the words in my mind.

I just had a story posted today and I see so many errors. I had honestly read and reread this story so many times. I have three different versions in its file. I wanted this to be a good story with sex, not a sex story, but my errors are going to be so glaring that I am afraid that I will lose the reader.

If you are very busy please disregard this plea for help, I really need someone with a bit of time on their hands, The first thing I would want to do is edit the story that just posted
Panama, The First Stop. There is a link in my sig if you should be interested in helping me.

I would be more than happy to return the favor and proof you stories. Please contact me by PM.
Thanks
Mikey

 

[snooper]

... I am seeking a person to work with me on stories, ... I want someone who is not too busy to be able to read a story and offer opinions that I can trust. I think this person should have a degree of patience that would put a monk to shame. A feel for the written word that lets it sound like a lover’s whisper in his/her ear. Someone who knows the mechanics involved in putting a story to the paper in such a way that it comes back to life when eyes scan over it. ...

I think we all want someone like that.

My pedigree is at Snooper and if you think I am a suitable editor, please feel free to contact me via there, or via a PM.

 

[mikey2much]

Looking forward to hearing from you

I think we all want someone like that.

My pedigree is at Snooper and if you think I am a suitable editor, please feel free to contact me via there, or via a PM.

Thanks for your rsponse Snooper,
I have sent a PM to you as well as sending the same message to you via the editors page. So which ever gets your attention first, the content is the same.
I look forward to hearing from and about you. I have read some of your post about editing and I think you know what you are talking about. I hope we can work together.
mikey