I got ripped apart on boob size

[mywifdigstriprz]

OK here's the deal. I wrote a story about a night my wife and I shared. For those interested it's in loving wives and is called "My Birthday" Now I'm not a writer and I will probably never write another story again so I expected to get ripped apart on my writing skills. No big deal. Now that didn't really happen. You know what I got ripped apart on... The size of my wife's boobs. She really is a 38F so that is what I said. I did get one nice anonymous comment that was fair and kind of defended me. So If you are reading this, thanks. Anyways WTF. Are that big of boobs not really imaginable? Not sexy? what? I like them they are fun. Anyways I ask what the true authors think of this situation

 

[rgraham666]

Myself, I never mention breast size using a measurement.

It's better to describe that piece, any piece, of anatomy using full words and not numbers and codes.

My feeling is that using measurements disengages the imagination of the reader and they lose interest in the story. The story becomes more like reading the specs for a car than actually riding in it. Not nearly as exciting.

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

Ok that makes sense Thanks

 

[lil_elvis]

As RG said using technical terms (38F boobs, 12-inch dicks, etc.) are the lazy way of describing a character. Much more fun for both the writer and reader to have an actual description. Whether the reader imgines the woman as C, D, F does not matter, what you want is an erotic image in his/her mind.

On the other hand, if the criticism was strictly that the commentator doesn't like women with really big boobs, then you can't get upset over personal preferences. No story ever written would please every reader.

But most importantly, if you want to keep writing or have the need to write, don't let criticism stop you. Learn from it. Make you next effort better.

Oh, and having a thick skin helps.

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

No the criticism was that I was FOS. I put the first line stating my story was true, because it was and that I was guilding the lily so to speak

 

[Quiet_Cool]

No the criticism was that I was FOS. I put the first line stating my story was true, because it was and that I was guilding the lily so to speak

Basically, they were saying your info was untrue, since the letter size was notably high. The difference between an A cup and a C cup is immense. I know a girl who's an E cup, and the difference between C and E (also two sizes difference) isn't all that astonishingly great. It seems the person in question is unaware of this simple fact.

On a side note, there are several people on this site who post stories about far-outlandish things that could never be true and they've never done and start out by claiming they are true. You've kinda' fallen in with a bad crowd on that first line, almost a guilt by association type deal. If you really do have a 14-inch penis, you may already be branded, friend.

Q_C

 

[Lauren Hynde]

Just because a story is true, it doesn't necessarily make it believable. In writing a story, it is more important to be believable than to nakedly present facts.

If you take the time to describe your characters (don't be boring, though), you can make them far more real to the reader than by presenting hard numbers.

 

[Brinnie]

well... What context did you use it in?

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

Brinnie
"As Jennifer got dressed in her favorite outfit, her 38F's were bulging against the shimmery red halter top. "

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

Basically, they were saying your info was untrue, since the letter size was notably high. The difference between an A cup and a C cup is immense. I know a girl who's an E cup, and the difference between C and E (also two sizes difference) isn't all that astonishingly great. It seems the person in question is unaware of this simple fact.

On a side note, there are several people on this site who post stories about far-outlandish things that could never be true and they've never done and start out by claiming they are true. You've kinda' fallen in with a bad crowd on that first line, almost a guilt by association type deal. If you really do have a 14-inch penis, you may already be branded, friend.

Q_C

I appreciate all the guidance on description.

QC Are you saying I'm lying too?
I go to fredericks with her to buy her bra's. I know what size she wears.

 

[Quiet_Cool]

I appreciate all the guidance on description.

QC Are you saying I'm lying too?
I go to fredericks with her to buy her bra's. I know what size she wears.

Saying you're lieing? No, not at all. Nor did I intend to do so. If you got that impression from my comment on you having a 14-inch penis, I was merely making a joke about some of those people I'd mentioned. If you've read around the site, you probably already know who I mean.

"This is a true story, and I'll start by mentioning that my wife has all natural 99ZZ titts that stand up like trained dogs. At 35, she still looks 18, and works out everyday, and loves sucking my 14-inch cock and taking it in her ass every day..."

Read about twenty of those, and you start shying away from the type of story that starts with that line. The 14-inch penis comment was a reference to them, not you (of course, if that line's in your story...).

As for you lieing, I seriously doubt it, simply because, as I said, 38F wouldn't be the Dixie Dynamite sized titts some people may envision, and if you were one of them, what are the chances you'd show up here, where we know a thing or two about writing, and draw attention to it?

Oh, and on another note, consider this: If you wouldn't have gone shopping with her for bras, or had her mention her size or noted it when doing laundry or some other such thing, would you be able to guess her size? If not, then you'll understand the point of not mentioning it in a story. I can't picture them, and would have guessed the girl I know with E's to be a D or C cup instead (and yes, I've seen them bare). Just one more reason to dodge the numerical values in such stories.

Q_C

 

[CharleyH]

Loving wives readers are mainly dorks, and most guys love big tits, and many porn stories written by men include double Z's.

I have come to learn that no one can write in this category with amazing results unless:

1) the wife is loving but not a slut
2) the slut is a wife, but only the husbands
3) the wife does what her husband desires, whether that it one guy, one chick or a whole football team of either, which he can sit back and be happy about.
3) the husband must retain his masculinity at all times, even if he is timid.

After that any tit size will not matter, only dick size does, well, the husbands in the end, anyhow.

Edit: Where is the loving husbands category?

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

OK my apologies. I see your point

 

[CharleyH]

14-inch penis
Q_C

ROFLOL. But does a guy want reality, either? LOL

"It's small I know. Barely an average 6 inchs hard, but she enjoyed it. In fact, she moaned when I sputtered into her pussy, oh, she moaned loudly, and then asked, "Did you cum, yet?"

lol

 

[Quiet_Cool]

ROFLOL. But does a guy want reality, either? LOL

"It's small I know. Barely an average 6 inchs hard, but she enjoyed it. In fact, she moaned when I sputtered into her pussy, oh, she moaned loudly, and then asked, "Did you cum, yet?"

lol

Depends on the guy, but personally, as a reader, I like reality. I, unfortunately, do not have the high-society reading likes of many of our most frequent readers. Perhaps I should seek out Juan for guidance in my poor taste in fiction, eh?



Q_C

 

[kendo1]

"Is it in yet?" she asked.

 

[CharleyH]

Depends on the guy, but personally, as a reader, I like reality. I, unfortunately, do not have the high-society reading likes of many of our most frequent readers. Perhaps I should seek out Juan for guidance in my poor taste in fiction, eh?



Q_C

I am teasing, and exaggerrating as much as you - sort of - lol - , but I do happen to think there would be a rebellion by many readers (mainly male) should reality porn take precedence, and I do not mean pizza boy cumming through the pie.

 

[Guest]

mywifdigstriprz -

(What in the hell should we call you?)

Um, where was I? Oh, yes.

It isn't necessary to be that specific with measurements. And it tends to annoy many readers, especially if they personally cannot compete with said measurement.

Can't you say she had huge tits? Or you loved cupping her large breasts? Or her hard nipples topped off her sizeable chest?

And big dicks are easily described. And NO, I'm not talking politics.

He can be thick, or immense, or fill her completely.

I think if you leave the details up to the reader they can more easily place themselves into the action.

Hell, sometimes I don't even name my characters.

But they all fuck.

 

[CharleyH]

mywifdigstriprz -

(What in the hell should we call you?)

His wife digs strippers so ... how about ... loser?

 

[Guest]

His wife digs strippers so ... how about ... loser?

Ouch.

 

[LadyJeanne]

Basically, they were saying your info was untrue, since the letter size was notably high. The difference between an A cup and a C cup is immense. I know a girl who's an E cup, and the difference between C and E (also two sizes difference) isn't all that astonishingly great. It seems the person in question is unaware of this simple fact.

On a side note, there are several people on this site who post stories about far-outlandish things that could never be true and they've never done and start out by claiming they are true. You've kinda' fallen in with a bad crowd on that first line, almost a guilt by association type deal. If you really do have a 14-inch penis, you may already be branded, friend.

Q_C

mywifdigstriprz, I read your story posted here, and it does have the hallmarks of the kind of story QC references. The entire story reads that way. It is, in fact, indistinguishable from the outlandish stories that could never be true.

The part about not knowing where to find the stripper because the club burned down is the only detail that seems too imaginative to be fiction.

Read more stories posted in the category and you'll recognize the signs of what I call "The Penthouse Syndrome"...

"Dear Penthouse,

I never thought it could happen to me, but I was just walking across the street when the 38F blonde cop arrested me for jaywalking. Before I knew what was happening, I was spread eagle against her cruiser and she was patting me down. Suddenly, I felt her rubbing my dick through my pants and grinding her face against my ass. She grabbed my hips and spun me around so she could gobble my hard cock down her throat over and over until I shot my load onto those huge tits. And that was only the beginning. She hauled me in to the station where all the lady cops took turns sucking my huge dick all night. I never even had to pay the jaywalking fine!"

 

[CharleyH]

Ouch.

Well? Really?

 

[English Lady]

Hello love,

I have this allergy to precise sizes....heights, wweights, boob size or dick size, if I see it it makes me cringe, my face scrunches up and I make that hissing throughyour teeth sound, which believe me does not add to the fun of masturbation at all!

So i'd read the boobs line and bugger off to another story (sorry, that's just the way I am, i might miss some good stories 'cos of it, i dunno) but I'd not thin 38F were massive. Nope, my babies are at the moment a 44D, but in the past I was up to a 48E (when pregnant) and before i lost a little weight my boobs were 46DD! So, 38F sounds not much of anything to me from my perspective!

Oh and the loving wives crowd are a hard crowd to please -I wouldn't take it too personally if I was you

 

[Liar]

Well? Really?

Name wasn't mywiffuxtriprz.

 

[mywifdigstriprz]

His wife digs strippers so ... how about ... loser?

He's just jealous he has to sneak to the strip clubs and I don't

As for the rest of the comments, thanks. But all are reasons I'm probably never going to do another story, I'm just not good at it. Oh well it was worth a shot hopefully my story will just get buried in the masses of them.