I could use some help

[FingerTwister]

Greetings and Salutations all. I've been coming to this site sporadically for a few years. I've finally decided to hop on the bandwagon and give it the good ol college try. My first story, It's Been a While, has just cleared and is ready to be read. If some of you would be so kind as to give it a perusal and let me know what you think, I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you again, Your Humble Narrator,
Alex

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=189427

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Greetings and Salutations all. I've been coming to this site sporadically for a few years. I've finally decided to hop on the bandwagon and give it the good ol college try. My first story, It's Been a While, has just cleared and is ready to be read. If some of you would be so kind as to give it a perusal and let me know what you think, I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you again, Your Humble Narrator,
Alex

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=189427

Hi Alex

I will give it a look, and I am sure more Ah authors will, but you would probably get more and quicker feedback if you tried the story feedback forum. In general, it's the best way to go to get some reads & opinions.

 

[neonlyte]

Thats a hot little number Alex.

Welcome to the forum - you're a writer

Post your self on the 'read the one above me', that way people will read you and you can return the favour.

I've Read, Voted and PC'd

Good Luck

 

[FingerTwister]

Thank you both.

I have joined the read the one above me, thread, and will post mine on teh feedback.

Thank you for the kind words,
Alex

 

[neonlyte]

Alex
Thanks for your feedback on Joy, much appreciated.

The way the 'Read a story above' works is that you read, VOTE and send feed back, I think you forgot to vote on my story Joy, no big deal, but some might feel upset if you don't follow the game. Best of luck with the writing.

 

[NoJo]

Greetings and Salutations all. I've been coming to this site sporadically for a few years. I've finally decided to hop on the bandwagon and give it the good ol college try. My first story, It's Been a While, has just cleared and is ready to be read. If some of you would be so kind as to give it a perusal and let me know what you think, I would greatly appreciate it.

Thank you again, Your Humble Narrator,
Alex

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=189427

Phew, what a nice way to start work! Great story, finger.

 

[Guest]

Very good and HOT story. Cannot wait for more from you, FingerTwister. You write sex as it is, and the way I love it.

Lou