Cruel2BKind
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Yup. That's me.
I can edit gay male stories
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CindyUSA
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I have a few MM stories that I need proofed
I have been rejected on other web site that require an absolute correct grammar spelling story. I cannot proof my own work and ask for your help. My stories are MM with some CD tossed in. There is oral, anal, and some light BDSM.
I had one story rejected because the story was about receiving oral while driving. Another story was rejected because it dealt with blackmail, forced sex, asphyxiation and a few other taboo subjects. So need someone to look at those stores and see what can be done to salvage the story.
My email address is[personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]
So looking for someone to proof first, then for a editor who can direct me on the story line, character development and the continuity of the story.
Thank you for your time
Cindy
I have been rejected on other web site that require an absolute correct grammar spelling story. I cannot proof my own work and ask for your help. My stories are MM with some CD tossed in. There is oral, anal, and some light BDSM.
I had one story rejected because the story was about receiving oral while driving. Another story was rejected because it dealt with blackmail, forced sex, asphyxiation and a few other taboo subjects. So need someone to look at those stores and see what can be done to salvage the story.
My email address is[personal info prohibited per our forum guidelines]
So looking for someone to proof first, then for a editor who can direct me on the story line, character development and the continuity of the story.
Thank you for your time
Cindy
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sr71plt
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Your e-mail address will probably be erased shortly, Cindy, as they aren't permitted in Literotica forum posts.
Why don't you go ahead and try to post your stories as they are to Literotica? If any of them contain snuff (asphixiation, which is usually termed breath control in erotica if it isn't leading to death), they won't fly at Literotica. But the other elements you mention look like they are permitted here. (I don't know what you mean by CD.)
You could also PM the OP of this thread. You've posted a request for editing to a thread offering editing.
Why don't you go ahead and try to post your stories as they are to Literotica? If any of them contain snuff (asphixiation, which is usually termed breath control in erotica if it isn't leading to death), they won't fly at Literotica. But the other elements you mention look like they are permitted here. (I don't know what you mean by CD.)
You could also PM the OP of this thread. You've posted a request for editing to a thread offering editing.
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nomoretears00
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Without reading the story I'd guess the OP probably means cross dressing. 
CindyUSA
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clearification
Yes, CD is cross-dressing. The story is not as violent at it sounds. The asphyxiation is just what happens when some tries to deep throat, and the character did learn quickly breath control.
I have posted two stories without proofing them and you can use them as samples of what not to do. I would like to get a "A" on my story not a "D" .
I am having some difficulty in finding a editor, sent off five requests and only received one reply back. I have five stories ready to be proof and do not want to have one person be loaded down.
So I am still looking for someone to proof my stories for grammar, and spelling. My story line, characters might need some development. And I would like to know if the erotic portion of the story are sufficient for arousal.
So if anyone has the time and would like to assist me, please send me a email.
Cindy
Yes, CD is cross-dressing. The story is not as violent at it sounds. The asphyxiation is just what happens when some tries to deep throat, and the character did learn quickly breath control.
I have posted two stories without proofing them and you can use them as samples of what not to do. I would like to get a "A" on my story not a "D" .
I am having some difficulty in finding a editor, sent off five requests and only received one reply back. I have five stories ready to be proof and do not want to have one person be loaded down.
So I am still looking for someone to proof my stories for grammar, and spelling. My story line, characters might need some development. And I would like to know if the erotic portion of the story are sufficient for arousal.
So if anyone has the time and would like to assist me, please send me a email.
Cindy
lovecraft68
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Yes, CD stands for cross dressing. This is obvious to both those with some common sense and ability to think, and of course to those who are familiar with Porn "lingo"
Again Pilot demonstrates his total lack of knowledge in the erotica genre he claims to have had so much success in.
Problem for him is that it's hard to google abbreviations and I doubt the CMS has any mention of things like this.
being that he has no experience beyond his own vanilla lifestyle he is helpless if he cannot look something up.
admittedly this one was not as bad as not knowing what a "soft swing" is, especially when claiming you and the wife are or were "open" at one point.
Tell you what SR, you have any questions you can feel free to ask me rather than embarrass yourself.
Again Pilot demonstrates his total lack of knowledge in the erotica genre he claims to have had so much success in.
Problem for him is that it's hard to google abbreviations and I doubt the CMS has any mention of things like this.
being that he has no experience beyond his own vanilla lifestyle he is helpless if he cannot look something up.
admittedly this one was not as bad as not knowing what a "soft swing" is, especially when claiming you and the wife are or were "open" at one point.
Tell you what SR, you have any questions you can feel free to ask me rather than embarrass yourself.
nomoretears00
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CD can also stand for compact dick or cute daddy. That's why I said I was guesssing at what was meant. Without reading the story there was really no way of knowing for sure. Then the OP came back and clarified.
So looking for someone to proof first, then for a editor who can direct me on the story line, character development and the continuity of the story.http://www.*****.info/iPad.gif
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Cross-dressing isn't a kink I'm into, and I don't pretend to know everything about everything. I'll leave both of those to Lovecraft68.
SR has spanked me pretty hard. I am no longer an editor. Better contact him if you are seeking one. I am worthless and weak, and shudder in his presence.
Cruel2BKind
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Haven't edited anything in a while, so if you're interested, PM me
CindyUSA
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Crossdressing
I have some experience with crossdressing and can review your story for correctness. I would not want your main character to put on panties first then pantyhose. Or not use a concealer before the foundation. Most of the other stuff between a CD and a M or F is standard, oral or anal. I can also help with the submission or sissificaion story line.
I am not too good with proofing stories, but have a couple of programs that will help with the spelling, and grammar. So if you have a story in draft, let me read it and give you my point of view.
Cindy
I have some experience with crossdressing and can review your story for correctness. I would not want your main character to put on panties first then pantyhose. Or not use a concealer before the foundation. Most of the other stuff between a CD and a M or F is standard, oral or anal. I can also help with the submission or sissificaion story line.
I am not too good with proofing stories, but have a couple of programs that will help with the spelling, and grammar. So if you have a story in draft, let me read it and give you my point of view.
Cindy
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