I can do the story, but the sex scenes I am utterly useless.

[Balstrome]

My 1st story, I have the flow of how I want to story to go. Basically foursome, one mom with her son, who has a gf and a mom. They heading off to varisty. son/gf long term relationship, +10 years growing up together. Son has some feeling for both moms as well. They share a apartment with a trans guy. Who suffers a really bad bigoted attack. Son ends up in bed with trans guy, no sex, just to warm him up from extreme cold outside hypothermia/skin on skin fastest way to transfer body heat. Return home, relations with both moms, start to get interesting for both son and gf.

That is the basic story, now I just have to fill in the hot sex part, which I really suck at. Want the sex to be realistic and good as would happen with proper adults who are educated in the way of the bed. What I am looking for is a expert in this field to give me some major pointers on how to go about this. I would even be willing to hand over the non sex part of the story for them to publish as their own.

 

[Carnevil9]

There's no secret formula. You just have to practice. Also, you have to read, read, read. Read a bunch of stories here; concentrate on Hot H stories and contest winners so you know you will be getting good examples. Read a variety by many different authors, and see how each one handles the sex scenes. Eventually, you will work out a style that works for you.

Then write, write, write. Don't worry about if it is any good for now. Just think of it as calisthenics to get your "muscles" in shape for the real thing. Then delete it all and start over. Eventually, you will realize you are writing good stuff!

 

[tristianc]

When it comes to writing the sex part in an erotic story I’ve found that it doesn’t need to be that long as it’s very repetitive and should be filled with dialogue mostly.

 

[Rob_Royale]

When I first started writing I had the same trouble, so I broke it down into simple steps.

Step 1 - What they did. Break it down action by action.

Tommy leaned across and kissed Debbie.
She sighed and leaned against him.
He reached out and touched her breast.
She grabbed his hand and squeezed tighter.

Those are just the actions. Then next, I go back and add reactions and the odd adjective and adverb.

Tommy leaned across and kissed Debbie softly.
She sighed and leaned against him, sharing her body heat.
Encouraged by her response, he reached out and touched her breast gently.
Debbie moaned then grabbed his hand and squeezed it tighter around her breast.

Then go I go back add some supportive dialogue and smooth it into paragraphs.

Tommy leaned across and kissed Debbie softly. She sighed and leaned against him, sharing her bod heat. Encouraged by her response, he reached out and touched her breast gently.

Debbie moaned then grabbed his hand and squeezed it tighter around her breast. "I've been waiting all semester for you to do that," she said with a soft smile.

Tommy grinned shyly. "Yeah, well I'm kind of a slow learner."

Debbie looked into his eyes and then leaned in to kiss him again. "Worth the wait."

This is how I got through sex scenes until I was comfortable enough with them to just write them like anything else. It just takes practice.

 

[StillStunned]

Remember to slow down and use all the senses.

Touch - the feel of your lover's skin under your fingertips, their breath on your neck, the warmth of their body close to yours.

Hearing - throaty moans, breathless gasps, murmured dialogue, the slap of thigh against thigh.

Scent - the lingering trace of perfume in your lover's hair, the sweet wine on their breath, the warm intimate scents of their sexy bits.

Taste - your lover's kisses, the sweat on their skin, the taste of yourself after they've pleasured you.

Sight - your lover's muscles clenching, the thin skin stretched tight from their arousal, their hair plastered against their sweaty forehead.

Of course you don't have to do all this, but including at least some elements will slow your sex scene down and make it feel more intimate and more real.

 

[Abbafan]

I wouldn't worry too much about it sounding cliched at times. Or unoriginal. It's hard to come up with new ways to describe the act itself, but I think people still like to have it included.