I appreciate feedback as much as the next person ...

[Sabledrake]

... but this one left me boggled:

nice put u need to write more he's got to have rivels and that bit had to do some think to her

From "anonymous," of course. And now I'm going to wonder for days which story it was in reference to, since the feedback didn't say.

Sabledrake

 

[cloudy]

... but this one left me boggled:

nice put u need to write more he's got to have rivels and that bit had to do some think to her

From "anonymous," of course. And now I'm going to wonder for days which story it was in reference to, since the feedback didn't say.

Sabledrake

Butchery of the language, how nice.

To be fair, English may not be Anon's first language. However, it would have been nice if they'd let you know which story s/he was referring to.

 

[Guest]

nice put u need to write more he's got to have rivels and that bit had to do some think to her

That was me.

 

[wishfulthinking]

... but this one left me boggled:

nice put u need to write more he's got to have rivels and that bit had to do some think to her

From "anonymous," of course. And now I'm going to wonder for days which story it was in reference to, since the feedback didn't say.

Sabledrake

Nicely put?
You should write more?
He should have rivals, and give her something to think about?

I definitely agree with the first two.

Doesn't sound too much like CV because it's more of an language thing than a drunken slur


Pssst, don't repeat this, but CV you crack me up!

 

[dr_mabeuse]

Sable,

I think that's from the Nobel committee. They always write like that. Translated from the Swedish, you know.

---dr.M.

 

[Black Tulip]

First I laughed my head off. After I screwed it back on, I tried to translate.

nice put u need to write more he's got to have rivels and that bit had to do some think to her

Nicely put.
You need to write more.
He's got to have rivals
and that bitch has to have something done to her.

Don't you love them?

As the others said, the first two comments can be applied to all your stories, and I absolutely agree. LOL

 

[Rainbow Skin]

No, no, "nice put" must be "nice but". It's clearly a measured praise that the story (the one of the 52 that you can easily find by reading through them and seeing which it fits best) is nice, but would be improved by following those very sensible and perspicacious suggestions. P for B and K for G -- definitely Swedes. You're up for something if you get your act together. It was probably anonymous because they don't want to be seen as unfair to the less qualified....

 

[Sabledrake]

I'm so very glad it was as clear to everyone else as it was to me ...

Sabledrake

 

[Guest]

I think they said

Nicely put -
You should write more -

Please include handcuffs, spanking, multiple partners and lots of wild anal sex in your next story.

I'm fairly certain that's what they said!

 

[Sabledrake]

Well, in that case, they're going to be disappointed on at least one of the four counts ...

Sabledrake

 

[Guest]