I and cousin of the true story.(Serialize)

[healthstars]

That's when the school,My younger female cousin and I are in the same school.One day, younger female cousin have a fever to rest at home,After school, I went to see her.She returned home from the hospital, still sleeping.When I arrived at her house, she just woke up.She saw me coming,is smile.

 

[healthstars]

My English is very poor,I hope you can understand.This is happening to me a story.I would as soon as he finished

 

[healthstars]

I sat with her for a while, she said she felt hot,Because she is covered with a thick quilt.I said if too hot,take off your clothes.His face turned red,She likes to make fun of but she is very shy.

 

[healthstars]

Because she is wearing only underwear.I gave her a sweat towel

 

[healthstars]

http://healthstars.tk/1.jpgNobody reads the story

 

[sr71plt]

A claimed true story by someone whose English obviously isn't up to writing stories? Sorry, but these might be reasons few are reading it. (Claiming something is true brings on the "Yeah, right" factor.) There are too many other stories available here without those impediments.

 

[healthstars]

yes,so I don't want to continue to write, because nobody support me

 

[sr71plt]

Why don't you write in your own first language? Deciding to write or not is a personal choice. I certainly wouldn't be guilted into begging someone to do it.

 

[lovecraft68]

Post over in the incest is best thread over in the Fetish forum, if they think its true, and they are damn gullible over there, they will definitely give it a look over and they would be your target audience anyway.

 

[CWatson]

yes,so I don't want to continue to write, because nobody support me

It's not our job to support you. That's not how this community works and it's certainly not how writing works. If you come up with a full story, we will give you the support it warrants--we'll tell you what you did well and what you can improve; gradually you'll get better. It's how every writer on earth before you got their start; and if it was good enough for Shakespeare or Tolstoy or Victor Hugo, it's good enough for you. But work comes before rewards; always. If you're not okay with that, don't write.