Well, I am. A pervert, closet romantic and frustrated idealist.
Since you are already here I was wondering if you would check out the first chapter of my story, Serpent's Salvation, in the Gay male section. I would dearly love some constructive feedback on it.
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=184017
It is gay, supernatural, mythology-based fantasy romance. The story starts slowly, so there isn't any sex yet, but what little feedback I've generated has been very kind. I would like a little more advice, however. Do I give away too much? Is the exposition well incorporated? Do my characters have a unique voice? Should I take up high-altitude synchronized crochet instead?
Since you are already here I was wondering if you would check out the first chapter of my story, Serpent's Salvation, in the Gay male section. I would dearly love some constructive feedback on it.
http://english.literotica.com:81/stories/showstory.php?id=184017
It is gay, supernatural, mythology-based fantasy romance. The story starts slowly, so there isn't any sex yet, but what little feedback I've generated has been very kind. I would like a little more advice, however. Do I give away too much? Is the exposition well incorporated? Do my characters have a unique voice? Should I take up high-altitude synchronized crochet instead?
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