Husband confronts cheating wife

[greene14]

This story would begin where a cheating wife (Elaine) gets confronted by her husband (Bill).

In the ensuing conversation/row, a number of things become apparent.

1. That she's been cheating on him for a lot longer (a LOT longer) than he realises.

2. That as the years have gone by she's been doing more and more with her lovers than she ever did with him.

3. It's not only been men she's been cheating with, but the occasional woman also.

These revelations completely blow his mind and put him seriously on the back foot. She goes on to tell him what a useless worm he is, hasn't satisfied her for ages etc etc.

She then ends up using her strap-on, on him!!!!!

 

[sirhugs]

interesting concept
not into the 'uselessworm ' part
plus think it needs to go somewhere further- just not sure where. Does she tie him to chair, force him to watch? bring gf home to share? swap meet?

 

[greene14]

Hmmm

Ok, the useless worm bit could go.

Maybe introduce a 2nd woman, and together they might tie him, and end up using him for a spit-roast!!!!

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Hmmm

Ok, the useless worm bit could go.

Maybe introduce a 2nd woman, and together they might tie him, and end up using him for a spit-roast!!!!

spit roast?

 

[greene14]

Ha ha

One at each end!!!!!!!!!!

 

[Colleen Thomas]

Glad to see you posted this Greene, good luck with it

-Colly

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Ha ha

One at each end!!!!!!!!!!

hmmm
nice touch
who is the otherwoman?

 

[greene14]

hMMM

Probably one of Elaine's female lovers.

Perhaps when she's getting the upper hand, when she's tied him maybe, she makes a phone call and invites her round.

Maybe a little femdom etc, with a strap-on at each end initially, then the one in his face gets removed & replaced..........................

 

[greene14]

Or to make it real extreme

The 2nd person could be a man, same thing happens.

Or maybe he comes (cums) along later!!!!

 

[Lovepotion69]

I'm sorry, I don't get it.
She has been cheating on him for ages, and he is finally confronting her about it. She says he's an idiot who can't satisfy her etc etc.

How the heck does she end up doing him with a strap-on and why??? I just can't figure it out. If she really had been cheating on him for ages, and believes he's such a worm, then why the heck would she even bother staying with him in the first place, and why would she ever sleep with him? And in such a fashion!

 

[greene14]

Hmmmm

Sounds like someone might be taking it a little too seriously???


Perhaps in the row she just flips and takes the upper hand, saying that she'll show him how to deliver a good fucking??

Then perhaps as he's on the back foot, he inexplicably becomes submissive, maybe a latent urge, previously unexplored??

It's just fantasy!!!!

 

[Dilvede]

boring, used up, and really not to erotic as its a mainstay of society nowadays somewhat brought on by the feminazi women rule everything so we can be as much whores as men are percieved to be. But, if you wanna spruce it up, have her do a seductive tease of him while saying it and sit him down making him kiss and suckle her clitoris while he watches DVD's of her other encounters infront of him.

 

[sirhugs]

boring, used up, and really not to erotic as its a mainstay of society nowadays somewhat brought on by the feminazi women rule everything so we can be as much whores as men are percieved to be. But, if you wanna spruce it up, have her do a seductive tease of him while saying it and sit him down making him kiss and suckle her clitoris while he watches DVD's of her other encounters infront of him.

feminazi? haven't heard that in years

I write Loving Wives a lot- no whores or bitches in my stories

 

[greene14]

Just write it

In all honesty, I don't care. The author can play with it as they like. I've delivered the general idea, I'd just like it a lot if somebody wrote it!

How about it Sirhugs, you up for it????

 

[sirhugs]

Re: Just write it

In all honesty, I don't care. The author can play with it as they like. I've delivered the general idea, I'd just like it a lot if somebody wrote it!

How about it Sirhugs, you up for it????

I have other plots om my plate. Not saying no, but other stories await.

 

[A7inchPhildo]

Not a really good set up for me, a little too redundant of a cuckold story. Your idea is the basic plot for 90% of the cuckold crap. Give us some reasons why? what started this? why now? Remeber the Who, What, Where, When, Why, and Because? Makes a cause and effect!

This story would begin where a cheating wife (Elaine) gets confronted by her husband (Bill).

In the ensuing conversation/row, a number of things become apparent.

1. That she's been cheating on him for a lot longer (a LOT longer) than he realises.

2. That as the years have gone by she's been doing more and more with her lovers than she ever did with him.

3. It's not only been men she's been cheating with, but the occasional woman also.

These revelations completely blow his mind and put him seriously on the back foot. She goes on to tell him what a useless worm he is, hasn't satisfied her for ages etc etc.

She then ends up using her strap-on, on him!!!!!

The End
How did you like my version? Exactly it sucked because it is the basic format and nothing more. Sorry green14 need an idea not a basic list.

Example:
Kinda like write me an incest story and there will be family members in it, and one family member does not know the other family members are having sex then they do and Wow they are family.

 

[greene14]

I see.....

I see your point, but in my view, that would be like writing the thing myself. If I wanted to do that I would.

Elaine IS my wife. I get off on the idea of her screwing around. She never has and never will so I am left with fantasies and stories for my biggest kick!

When she fucks around in my imagination, sometimes I like it to be with my knowledge, sometimes I like it to be without. Sometimes I like her to be forced, sometimes dominated and sometimes even tied & blindfolded. Sometimes I like her to be co-erced and sometimes I like her to be a wanton little slut.

Sometimes I want to be watching, sometimes I'm spying and sometimes I'm even in the next room, completely unaware.

I've written a number of my own stories, but the problem with them is that although I have a good time writing them, when I come to read them again, I know the plot and the ending, and the kick isn't as great.

I found this website a couple of weeks ago and thought it was brilliant, where people write stories with and for each other.

It also seemed a great chance to ask other people, (some of whom seem to like writing to order, indeed a lot even ask for idea's) to write a story where I would provide the idea, they would put it into words and bring it to conclusion. A conclusion that I would have no idea of, until I read it.

Now if my idea doesn't flick your switch then fine. Read it, dislike it and move on. But don't bother telling me that my idea sucks, because firstly I don't care one jot about your negative opinion, and secondly, because in my perverted and twisted imagination, she does!!!!

Thanks for your time

Greene14

 

[A7inchPhildo]

I am not sure if you refer to "Chyoo" on the other side of lit but you can also creat a story like that here . It can be very entertaining. Located easily at the bottom of each thread page in the forum jump(at the bottom of the list).

Although I will admit I come off as being perturbed in my last post on your thread you should not take it that way. I was trying to be constructive and have achieved what I was looking for. Well, at least made you think a bit.

Elaine IS my wife. I get off on the idea of her screwing around. She never has and never will so I am left with fantasies and stories for my biggest kick!

When she fucks around in my imagination, sometimes I like it to be with my knowledge, sometimes I like it to be without. Sometimes I like her to be forced, sometimes dominated and sometimes even tied & blindfolded. Sometimes I like her to be co-erced and sometimes I like her to be a wanton little slut.

Sometimes I want to be watching, sometimes I'm spying and sometimes I'm even in the next room, completely unaware.

At least this gives a bit of information to work with, I can kind of see what you are digging for now a little bit more.
Wives loving/cheating happends to be the topic I am most interested in writing about. I tend to write from personal experiences, but always looking for new twisted plots to enhance a fantasy story.

"Trying not to beat a dead horse." Before you only stated the obvious, that tells me nothing I did not already know. Err, how do I say this nice if you like to write a Cheating wife story you kinda know the basic theme. I am looking for the plot, the situation, the setting, the people, ... and then I can decide yeah or nah or parts are good to incorporate.

I see your point, but in my view, that would be like writing the thing myself. If I wanted to do that I would.

Uuuum, no if you wanted to write it you do and as you stated you have. You are looking for a new version of what kinky thoughts drive you wild. From what you have said so far I could write several stories from and honestly I might not ever hit an area you find exceptionaly arousing.


I will post a thread in story ideas of what I look for.

 

[Lovepotion69]

greene14,
I didn't take the story too serious, and I know it's a fantasy. Trust me, if I took every story (topic) on Lit serious, I'd be going bananas. I see it all as fantasies and nothing else.

What I was trying to convey by that post was that I wondered how the character thinks and reasons. To me it didn't seem logical with the information you had given.

A7inchPhildo has explained better that it's all about the five W's. Having someone suddenly walk into a room and fuck the person lying on the sofa may work in movie porn. Personally I prefer at least some plot (perhaps because I'm a woman), but especially when it comes to written porn. I want to know why the person would do something. Doesn't have to be very complicated (have to admit I can't take in too complicated and literary written porn after midnight), but I want SOME logic in it all.

A7inchPhildo's thread what he wants as a reader is good. That's what I want too. I won't go with a checklist to tick it off when reading a story, but paying attention to some details makes it more enjoyable reading.