Husband catches wife

[BlackSnake]

This thought came to me about a man comes home unexpectedly and catches his wife in bed with a young man.

There is money on the nightstand. The husband is trying to figure this all out, and concludes that the young man has paid her for sex.

The husband watches from a safe distance. Before the young man leaves, he makes another appointment for the next day confirming the cost of $50.

The husband is curious, so he continues to stay out of sight while the wife takes all sorts of characters, one after the other into their guest bedroom.

The husband realizes that it is time he is expected, so he sneaks out without being detected by his wife. The husband spots one of his wife's Johns and asks about getting laid in the area. The John gives the husband a name and number to call.

It is not the wife's name nor does the husband recognize the number. The husband calls the number and gets a recorded message. He recognizes his wife's voice. The message states available hours, which are the hours he was not at home.

He arrives back home at his expected time, and the wife greets him in her normal fashion. Watching his wife have sex with atleast five different guys, has him horny for her. She is willing to have him as usual.

During dinner, she asks about his day and he asks about hers. She says that she had the normal boring day. He resists making sarcatistic comments. He doesn't know what to do about this.

The husband leaves for work the next day as usual, but calls in watch from the street corner as one guy after another visits his wife.

What is he to do?

 

[silverwhisper]

it would seem--at least to me--that the logical denouement would involve the husband making an appointment himself. or, better still, perhaps he's at a bachelor party for a young colleague and she's part of the entertainment? maybe some kind of masquerade-type affair where he's wearing a mask or something? or perhaps she is?

ed

 

[BlackSnake]

it would seem--at least to me--that the logical denouement would involve the husband making an appointment himself. or, better still, perhaps he's at a bachelor party for a young colleague and she's part of the entertainment? maybe some kind of masquerade-type affair where he's wearing a mask or something? or perhaps she is?

ed

I agree that she should find out that he knows...DING!

She finds out that he knows, but he doesn't realizes it. She continues to service guys knowing that her husband is secretly watching.

But then what?

 

[jeninflorida]

who's point of view should this story be told from?

This thought came to me about a man comes home unexpectedly and catches his wife in bed with a young man.

There is money on the nightstand. The husband is trying to figure this all out, and concludes that the young man has paid her for sex.

The husband watches from a safe distance. Before the young man leaves, he makes another appointment for the next day confirming the cost of $50.

The husband is curious, so he continues to stay out of sight while the wife takes all sorts of characters, one after the other into their guest bedroom.

The husband realizes that it is time he is expected, so he sneaks out without being detected by his wife. The husband spots one of his wife's Johns and asks about getting laid in the area. The John gives the husband a name and number to call.

It is not the wife's name nor does the husband recognize the number. The husband calls the number and gets a recorded message. He recognizes his wife's voice. The message states available hours, which are the hours he was not at home.

He arrives back home at his expected time, and the wife greets him in her normal fashion. Watching his wife have sex with atleast five different guys, has him horny for her. She is willing to have him as usual.

During dinner, she asks about his day and he asks about hers. She says that she had the normal boring day. He resists making sarcatistic comments. He doesn't know what to do about this.

The husband leaves for work the next day as usual, but calls in watch from the street corner as one guy after another visits his wife.

What is he to do?

 

[silverwhisper]

blacksnake: ever see the movie bachelor party, w/ a young tom hanks? i think that this would work pretty well that way. as to what next: perhaps there's some kind of act that either the one or the other of the couple wanted to try but could never have, so when the couple get together at the climax, that's what they do? i know it's so trite to throw out anal for something like that, but it's all that comes to mind, frankly.

jen: given the observation angle that blacksnake suggests, i think it's practically mandatory to be written from the husband's POV. an interesting twist however might be to change POVs at several points: husband's, wife's, customer's?

ed

 

[jeninflorida]

blacksnake: ever see the movie bachelor party, w/ a young tom hanks? i think that this would work pretty well that way. as to what next: perhaps there's some kind of act that either the one or the other of the couple wanted to try but could never have, so when the couple get together at the climax, that's what they do? i know it's so trite to throw out anal for something like that, but it's all that comes to mind, frankly.

jen: given the observation angle that blacksnake suggests, i think it's practically mandatory to be written from the husband's POV. an interesting twist however might be to change POVs at several points: husband's, wife's, customer's?

ed

i'm over thinking, but for $50 i would not want strangers in myhouse! granted, this is a wank story....but still, that part Kreeps me out. maybe she starts that way, then hubby enjoys it and the money, he becmes her pimp? takes her to hotels and starts to charge more?

 

[silverwhisper]

well, from a realism perspective, neighbors would become suspicious very quickly if these meetings took place at the house.

i can't speak for blacksnake but for my part, i don't dismiss the stuff that is posted here as "mere wank stories". i put my soul into what i publish here. i refuse to believe i'm alone in that regard.

ed

 

[BlackSnake]

well, from a realism perspective, neighbors would become suspicious very quickly if these meetings took place at the house.

i can't speak for blacksnake but for my part, i don't dismiss the stuff that is posted here as "mere wank stories". i put my soul into what i publish here. i refuse to believe i'm alone in that regard.

ed

You're not alone. I put a lot of thought into the stories that I write here.

I'm here to get help on fully developing my ideas, and to help others with their ideas.

I could tone down the number of visitors and increase the price, but I would like the husband's initial thought to be that his wife is cheating on him with a particular man, but then learns that there are more men and they are paying to sleep with her.

Maybe, it's the neighbors that she is sleeping with...I'm still open.

 

[silverwhisper]

what if his discovery isn't b/c he sees them at home but b/c he sees new lingerie in the laundry he's never seen before and finds a motel matchbook? maybe the motel clerk says, "o yeah, [name], she's in her usual room. hey, what's she charge?"

something like that, maybe?

ed

 

[BlackSnake]

what if his discovery isn't b/c he sees them at home but b/c he sees new lingerie in the laundry he's never seen before and finds a motel matchbook? maybe the motel clerk says, "o yeah, [name], she's in her usual room. hey, what's she charge?"

something like that, maybe?

ed

very do able

The husband asks the clerk about the a woman that entered the motel, giving the clerk his wife's description. Oh, the clerk knows her very well, but she's with a client right now.

The wife could have cut a deal with the clerk to keep her appointments. The wife calls the clerk when she is done with one client, so the clerk can send the next.

 

[silverwhisper]

what if the clerk is letting her use the room at a reduced rate? the john pays her for the room but takes the difference out in trade?

i suggest against using much interaction b/n the clerk and wife: she probably wants her mobile phone clear in case a new business prospect calls, no?

ed

 

[BlackSnake]

what if the clerk is letting her use the room at a reduced rate? the john pays her for the room but takes the difference out in trade?

i suggest against using much interaction b/n the clerk and wife: she probably wants her mobile phone clear in case a new business prospect calls, no?

ed

Say the clerk is a character fully developed with his on issues and bond/friendship with the wife. The clerk handles the incoming calls and appointments for the wife. Twist, the clerk has seen a picture of the husband and runs interference. "Sorry sir, but I didn't see any woman fitting that description come in here." So the husband has to stock her.

When the clerk tells the wife, the wife is not fearful. She continues on with business as usual, but has the clerk to keep an eye on him.

The wife leaves the window curtains cracked getting off on the fact that her husband is watching her having sex for money.

At home, she is normal pretending that she doesn't know that he knows.

I think there is some good ideas here...what do y'all think about this?

 

[silverwhisper]

write it, submit it: i'll vote in a heartbeat!

ed

 

[BlackSnake]

write it, submit it: i'll vote in a heartbeat!

ed

So there it is, the husband spies on the wife while she is turning tricks. At home both pretend that there is nothing going on except the sex a home is a lot better.

The clerk begins to get along with the husband, but pretends like he doesn't know that husband is spying on his wife having sex with other men.

I really like this.

 

[silverwhisper]

so do i, blacksnake. :>

do me a favor and either bump this or PM me when it's up, would you?

ed

 

[Alt]

An alternative scenario...it was his wife paying off the young stud. After the husband realizes how much she has spending, he comes up with a plan for her to pay it all back.

 

[silverwhisper]

you know, i'd like to see both of them!

ed

 

[jeninflorida]

where is the location? Does anyone have research about call girls? I'm thinking $50 is pretty cheep, she should charge at least $200. I thought that the hollywood madam would get $1,000 per hour for a girl......

did you want the money to make a change in their life? or is she doing this just for fun?

This thought came to me about a man comes home unexpectedly and catches his wife in bed with a young man.

There is money on the nightstand. The husband is trying to figure this all out, and concludes that the young man has paid her for sex.

The husband watches from a safe distance. Before the young man leaves, he makes another appointment for the next day confirming the cost of $50.

The husband is curious, so he continues to stay out of sight while the wife takes all sorts of characters, one after the other into their guest bedroom.

The husband realizes that it is time he is expected, so he sneaks out without being detected by his wife. The husband spots one of his wife's Johns and asks about getting laid in the area. The John gives the husband a name and number to call.

It is not the wife's name nor does the husband recognize the number. The husband calls the number and gets a recorded message. He recognizes his wife's voice. The message states available hours, which are the hours he was not at home.

He arrives back home at his expected time, and the wife greets him in her normal fashion. Watching his wife have sex with atleast five different guys, has him horny for her. She is willing to have him as usual.

During dinner, she asks about his day and he asks about hers. She says that she had the normal boring day. He resists making sarcatistic comments. He doesn't know what to do about this.

The husband leaves for work the next day as usual, but calls in watch from the street corner as one guy after another visits his wife.

What is he to do?

 

[jeninflorida]

Great, the hubby spies...but he also loves the extra money. I kind of like the idea that she is earning $200 (min) per trick....

So there it is, the husband spies on the wife while she is turning tricks. At home both pretend that there is nothing going on except the sex a home is a lot better.

The clerk begins to get along with the husband, but pretends like he doesn't know that husband is spying on his wife having sex with other men.

I really like this.

 

[BlackSnake]

Great, the hubby spies...but he also loves the extra money. I kind of like the idea that she is earning $200 (min) per trick....

Well, I'd say that the husband doesn't get the cash directly. Say they have a lot of bills, and the wife is paying them off, but is not telling the husband that she is doing it.

He is the bread winner and ideally wants this wife to be a house wife and not work outside the home.

The wife is using the money to help pay off the bills, and to make needed repairs around the house.

Cool, this is what raises the husband's suspicions. He his working hard and doing the best that he can. He doesn't want his wife to worry about money, bills, and such. She keeps the house clean, has his meals ready on time, and screws his brains out. To him, she is doing enough and shouldn't have to work...mainly because he doesn't want any of the things she is doing for him to change.

 

[BlackSnake]

Synopsis

The husband, Jake Lowery gets promoted the supervisor at a major distribution plant, but he is not salary paid, so he gets extra money from working overtime. With his promotion he believes that he is making enough to marry the woman of his dreams, his girlfriend, Jacqueline “Jackie” Pratt.

Jackie grew up in the projects, struggling to get by the best way that she could. The jobs that she had usually involved giving her bosses sexual favors to maintain her employment. She hated it, but at times having to use her charms to make her bills.

They marry and move out of the Projects into a modest home in the suburbs. Jake promises that Jackie would never have to work another demeaning job again, and she promises to fulfill all of his fantasies, being the kind of wife he’d dreamt of.

Jackie wears stockings, garters, high-heels, and aprons for Jake. She has all his meals ready for him, servicing all his needs. Jake was a good lover, and she enjoyed the life he had provided for her. She knew she had a good man in Jake.

Cutbacks at Jake’s job left with the choice of taking a demotion or being layoff. With a mortgage, two car payments, and other bills, Jake had only one choice. He didn’t want to loose everything that he had worked so hard to get including Jackie, so he took the demotion and worked as much overtime as he could.

In spite of their financial problems, Jake refused to have Jackie to work outside their home. He promised her that she would never have to work again.

Jackie worried, but not about loosing the house and cars, but about the stress Jake was having trying to make ends meet. She wanted to help out, but he wasn’t having it.

While cleaning up around Jake’s home desk, she saw the bills and notices. She knew she had to help weather he liked it or not, but she had limited skills and the bills were immediate. The one thing that she had that never let her down when she found herself in a pinch was her charms.

Jackie had been honest with Jake about the things she had done to get by, even while they were dating. To her surprise, he had been excited by them and had pumped her for details. She understood Jake’s pride and how badly he wanted to hold on to the life he started for the both of them. She wanted it too, and decided that she would try to help with him knowing.

Jackie made a call to and old friend, Gaynell from her old neighborhood. Gaynell had gone to night school, and the got a job as a Hotel manager. She turned tricks to pay her way through school, but continued turning tricks for fun. Her motto was “Sex is better when they are paying for it.” When ever she felt like getting laid, she would place herself on-call with an upscale escort service.

Jackie figured that she could make enough quickly through the escort service to keep the bills from becoming too far behind. They hadn’t received any fail notices yet, so she would only pay what were passed due.

For a while, Jake believed that things weren’t as bad as they had seemed. He was delighted that he was able to splurge a little on Jackie, taking her out on the town. But, Jake’s luck did not hold for long. More cut backs at his job eliminated his overtime hours, so he started looking for another job. He began to worry.

Jackie found a final notice on a balloon payment that Jake had kept hidden. The balance was due and she believed that she had no other choice, other than to pay it. There was no doubt in her mind that Jake would become suspicious, but there was nothing else to do.

When Jake goes to tries to workout deal for the final notices, he is informed that the bills had been paid in full by Jackie. He sees that she is pretending as if nothing is wrong, and decides to cure his suspicions on his own. He snoops and spies on her, but acts if though he is none the wiser.

Jackie believes she has no worries, because she only turned tricks when Jake was at work. Be chance, she spots him as she is leaving out of a motel room with a client. She notices that he is trying to hide. At home, she goes about as normal, but finds him friskier than usual.

After a while, Jackie confronts Jake outside a motel room after he had been spying on her while she does her tricks. Jake confesses that he enjoyed watching her, since he had been laid off.

Jake finally lands another good job, and Jackie stop turning tricks. Jackie realizes that Jake liked watching her turn tricks, so she continued for his excitement.


What do you think?

 

[JRaven]

Based on what I've read, the average charge per hour for an escort is equal to what the normal charge per hour for a lawyer is. (Irronic, isn't it? You get screwed either way.) There are sites where you can search for escorts in your area. Some are incall, some are outcall.

I think that for this story, since she's using the same hotel room all the time, she'd probably charge $100 for a mid-sized town area to $300 for a larger city. More if it's on either of the coasts.

BTW, my research was based on the USofA.

Jenny

 

[BlackSnake]

Based on what I've read, the average charge per hour for an escort is equal to what the normal charge per hour for a lawyer is. (Irronic, isn't it? You get screwed either way.) There are sites where you can search for escorts in your area. Some are incall, some are outcall.

I think that for this story, since she's using the same hotel room all the time, she'd probably charge $100 for a mid-sized town area to $300 for a larger city. More if it's on either of the coasts.

BTW, my research was based on the USofA.

Jenny

I'm understand the costs involved with great detail. However, I'm glad to see that you have looked into it with some thought. Out calls are when the client provide the location, and in-calls are when you provide the location. For this story, she would be doing in-calls.

So, what do y'all think of the synopsis?

 

[jeninflorida]

cool, so does Jackie have any friends? does she keep in contact with any of her old friends.

this works money wise, as they start to live the high life. they dont over spend but they don't save, so when the income slows down things get tight.....

The husband, Jake Lowery gets promoted the supervisor at a major distribution plant, but he is not salary paid, so he gets extra money from working overtime. With his promotion he believes that he is making enough to marry the woman of his dreams, his girlfriend, Jacqueline “Jackie” Pratt.

Jackie grew up in the projects, struggling to get by the best way that she could. The jobs that she had usually involved giving her bosses sexual favors to maintain her employment. She hated it, but at times having to use her charms to make her bills.

They marry and move out of the Projects into a modest home in the suburbs. Jake promises that Jackie would never have to work another demeaning job again, and she promises to fulfill all of his fantasies, being the kind of wife he’d dreamt of.

Jackie wears stockings, garters, high-heels, and aprons for Jake. She has all his meals ready for him, servicing all his needs. Jake was a good lover, and she enjoyed the life he had provided for her. She knew she had a good man in Jake.

Cutbacks at Jake’s job left with the choice of taking a demotion or being layoff. With a mortgage, two car payments, and other bills, Jake had only one choice. He didn’t want to loose everything that he had worked so hard to get including Jackie, so he took the demotion and worked as much overtime as he could.

In spite of their financial problems, Jake refused to have Jackie to work outside their home. He promised her that she would never have to work again.

Jackie worried, but not about loosing the house and cars, but about the stress Jake was having trying to make ends meet. She wanted to help out, but he wasn’t having it.

While cleaning up around Jake’s home desk, she saw the bills and notices. She knew she had to help weather he liked it or not, but she had limited skills and the bills were immediate. The one thing that she had that never let her down when she found herself in a pinch was her charms.

Jackie had been honest with Jake about the things she had done to get by, even while they were dating. To her surprise, he had been excited by them and had pumped her for details. She understood Jake’s pride and how badly he wanted to hold on to the life he started for the both of them. She wanted it too, and decided that she would try to help with him knowing.

Jackie made a call to and old friend, Gaynell from her old neighborhood. Gaynell had gone to night school, and the got a job as a Hotel manager. She turned tricks to pay her way through school, but continued turning tricks for fun. Her motto was “Sex is better when they are paying for it.” When ever she felt like getting laid, she would place herself on-call with an upscale escort service.

Jackie figured that she could make enough quickly through the escort service to keep the bills from becoming too far behind. They hadn’t received any fail notices yet, so she would only pay what were passed due.

For a while, Jake believed that things weren’t as bad as they had seemed. He was delighted that he was able to splurge a little on Jackie, taking her out on the town. But, Jake’s luck did not hold for long. More cut backs at his job eliminated his overtime hours, so he started looking for another job. He began to worry.

Jackie found a final notice on a balloon payment that Jake had kept hidden. The balance was due and she believed that she had no other choice, other than to pay it. There was no doubt in her mind that Jake would become suspicious, but there was nothing else to do.

When Jake goes to tries to workout deal for the final notices, he is informed that the bills had been paid in full by Jackie. He sees that she is pretending as if nothing is wrong, and decides to cure his suspicions on his own. He snoops and spies on her, but acts if though he is none the wiser.

Jackie believes she has no worries, because she only turned tricks when Jake was at work. Be chance, she spots him as she is leaving out of a motel room with a client. She notices that he is trying to hide. At home, she goes about as normal, but finds him friskier than usual.

After a while, Jackie confronts Jake outside a motel room after he had been spying on her while she does her tricks. Jake confesses that he enjoyed watching her, since he had been laid off.

Jake finally lands another good job, and Jackie stop turning tricks. Jackie realizes that Jake liked watching her turn tricks, so she continued for his excitement.


What do you think?

 

[BlackSnake]

cool, so does Jackie have any friends? does she keep in contact with any of her old friends.

this works money wise, as they start to live the high life. they dont over spend but they don't save, so when the income slows down things get tight.....

Gaynell is Jackie's friend. No twists with Gaynell though.