Hung 18-year-old Home Alone!

[SillyBilly1993]

Forgive my terrible grammar!

Billy is an 18-year-old boy who lives with his mother in a big house. Mom has to leave the house to do something very important and leaves her teenage son alone in the house alone, given the fact that he's old enough to take care of himself. Since billy as the hole house to himself. Billy goes upstairs to take a shower! Then two young women armed with guns break into his house with the intent of stealing! But when William gets out of the shower he is caught off guard by the female invaders! William, practically naked and fearing for his life has to comply with the thieves! Then one of the girls orders him to put his hands up, he does so! But then his towel drops down reveling his monster penis! The girls were looking for cash and jewelry but its looks like they found something better!
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If got a lot of concepts of where the story can go but I can't write dialogue! I've got the characters set up but I need someone the scenes and dialogue! I'm looking for a realistic approach to this story! A lot of erotica is portrayed like a porno! I don't want to go that way! I want this to be like a erotic thriller where the women rob the dude's house and decide to take advantage of him! I want the characters and The dialogue to be realistic too! I've got some concepts for the characters and the scenarios but I'm still brainstorming ideas so I'll feed them to you whenever an idea pops in!

Since I'm the one that comes up with these ideas, the only thing I ask for is that you put my username as the creator in your writing. Thank you!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Character concept

Here's a picture that will give you an idea of what the characters will look like!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Thief: 1

Idea of what the characters will look like!

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Thief: 2

Picture of what the second robber looks like

 

[SevenSquared]

If got a lot of concepts of where the story can go but I can't write dialogue! I've got the characters set up but I need someone the scenes and dialogue! I'm looking for a realistic approach to this story!

Without wanting to knock your story idea, I think you're going to have to forget about realism. This story is simply not going to be realistic regardless of what you do. The best you can hope for is probably "not completely beyond the realms of possibility".

 

[SillyBilly1993]

I can deal with that!

We don't have to make it realistic! What I was talking about is I don't want the story to be cheesy!

 

[TheTitLover]

It's an interesting idea. I'd like to help but I have stories coming out of my ears right now.

I think I know what you're aiming for in the story. You want there to be realism in their motivations and dialogue. Some real fear on his part for example.

If you get no other interest in about a month or so, contact me.

 

[SillyBilly1993]

Exactly! Thank you for understanding!