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roxshot

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This is the first work of fiction I've written since college (wow I'm getting old). I wrote it for my wife who recently told me she has had non-consenual fantasies. Since it's mostly for my wife I guess I'm more concerned with how well the story comes across versus making it a work of art but any recommendations would be great. I have yet to come up with a good ending, please forgive that.



Teri knew something was wrong when she got out of the car but couldn’t quite put her finger on it. She’d find out soon enough. There was a sense of being watched but she quickly dismissed it as paranoia left over from the scary movie her husband Shane had taken her to the night before. She hated those movies, they made her jumpy for days afterwards. Even the slightest bump-in-the-night made her pull the covers up to her chin. Making things even worse, her husband Shane had been unexpectedly sent out of town on business by his asshole of a boss. She had to spend the night in their house alone.

She walked up driveway, sifting thru the day’s mail and thinking about how’d she like nothing more then to spend some “quality” time in bed with Shane and get her brains fucked out. She recalled their last encounter, a near 3 hour session that included some amazing oral loving, (Teri loved how he eat her pussy), some good fucking and some playtime with their new toy. This was a “little” something she had picked up the last time Shane was out of town. Actually calling it little was a bit like called a fat man Tiny because the thing was HUGE. At first she was apprehensive about using it, she didn’t want Shane to feel inadequate or jealous but when she saw the big smile on his face as she rode the rubber cock into her pussy she knew that he loved it as much as she did. And man did she love it! She nearly came as soon as the cock was fully inside, stretching her lips and filling her cunt with it’s massive size. There was just something about being fucked by a huge cock that made Teri lose control of her mind and body. She had fantasized about it as long as she could remember. Although she had been with a few guys who were a slightly above average, there wasn’t anyone who had filled her pussy like this. Her panties were beginning to moisten just thinking about it. But of course, Shane was more then adequate and what he may have lacked in size he more then made up for with moves. The “motion of the ocean” as they say. Oh well, if she couldn’t spend some fuck time with her hubby she’d would spend it with her new friend Tiny or maybe even her vibrating buddy, King Tut.

Day dreaming and still lost in these thoughts, she didn’t even notice the man who had slipped in behind her and was now standing in the shadows just beyond the garage. Pulling out her keys and unlocking the door she was quickly brought back to reality by the grip of a man’s arm around her neck and a hand over her mouth. She gasped, her eyes went wide with terror and her heart began pounding quickly in her chest. Had she ever been more scared in her life? She didn’t think so.

“Don’t say a fucking word bitch or it’ll be the last time you ever speak.” The man forcefully pushed her further into the kitchen then turned her face first against the wall. She felt his grip loosen slightly as he examined his surroundings and scanned the area for signs of anyone else in the house. “Hmm… looks like we’re home all alone bitch. No unwanted guests to spoil our fun.” Harshly pressing his body against hers, pinning her there with her head turned to the side.
“Please, just take the money and go.” She said, barely more then a whisper. Trying to control her emotions, trying to not to panic.
“Money? You think I’m here to rob you? Oh no sweetie, I’m not here to rob you. I’m here to fuck you! Did you really think you could tease me like that and expect to just walk away?
“What? Who the hell are you? I don’t under…” she said now being spun around to face the man holding her captive. Looking into his cold blue eye she immediately knew she was in trouble. Her mind stepped back an hour to the Kohl’s store, where she had last seen the tall man who was now standing in her kitchen.

Although she would never cheat on Shane, Teri didn’t see any harm in giving a little bit of a show. I mean for crying out loud, the guy was cute and had been practically drooling all over her from the minute she walked into the shoe department. When she realized she had an audience, Teri went straight for the sluttiest shoes she could find. A pair of red high heels that went perfectly with the short black skirt and stockings she was wearing would do the trick. Teri put her red heeled foot on the bench and leaned forward to adjust her stockings, exposing even more cleavage then the tight, low cut shirt normally permits. At this she could see a bulge begin to form in the man’s pants. He was clearly enjoying the show and that made it all the more exciting for Teri. After a few more pairs of heels, a glance high up her thigh and into skirt and an eyeful of her tits, playtime was over. There were things to do at home and it was getting late. Harmless. Now, she realized it was not so harmless after all.

“Personally, I thought the black strappy heels looked the best. They really made your legs look good and your ass look even better” he said, moving his right hand from her mouth down to her inner thigh. “But then again I’ve always been a sucker for a classic pair of fuck-me shoes.” slowly moving his hand up and down, edging closer and closer to her pussy. Suddenly she could feel his fingers push aside her panties and begin stoking up and down the length of her slippery cunt. She knew this was wrong, knew she should fight and tried to step aside. Her capture immediately slammed her hard against the wall. “Tsk. Tsk. You don’t want to spoil the fun do you? You wanted to act like a slut in the store and now I’m going to make you my little slut.”
“NO!”
“This can’t be happening, this has to be a dream.” Teri closed her eyes and thought to herself as if wishing it could make it true. The man continued to rub her pussy with increasing speed. She felt his fingers slip into her cunt, first one, then two and then a third. With his other hand the man ripped open her shirt and began mouthing her breasts. Teri fought it as hard and she could but let out a sigh and felt her checks begin flush. She was being ravaged by a stranger and was helpless to stop it. She could feel the burning sensation deep inside. The burn of desire,… of want… of need. She this, hated being out of control but at the same time she wanted him badly.
“Get on your knees slut!” the man commanded and forced down on her shoulder. Running his wet fingers across her lips he said “Mmm… I bet these lips know exactly how to suck a dick.” She could taste herself on those fingers and licked the juices from her lips. The man unbuttoned his pants and Teri came face to face with what was easily the largest cock she had ever seen in person. So thick, she could barely get her hand around it and it had to be at least 9 inches long. At first Teri licked the man’s cock slowly and timidly as if she had never sucked a dick before (lord knows that’s not true). Then the man suddenly thrusted his large cock into her mouth and began repeating it, picking up speed as he went. Before she knew it, Teri was sucking this cock as if it were the best tasting lolly pop in the whole fucking world. She sucked and licked and sucked and licked, stopping occasionally for a breath and to flick his balls with her tongue. Teri was lost now, mind and body. She was a slut and her dripping pussy wanted nothing more then to be fucked like one.
“Get the fuck up!” the man told her, taking his dick out. Standing up, Teri was immediately forced toward the kitchen table and then bent over it. Head down and eyes closed, she would finally get what her pussy wanted so badly. The man grabbed at her panties and then ripped them off exposing Teri’s cunt, now glistening with juices. For what seemed like forever there was nothing and Teri actually began to question if this really was a dream. Then it happened…
“OOOH!” Teri screamed as the head of his huge cock split her lips and entered her cunt. It was a tight fit but she was more then wet enough to accommodate his overwhelming size. Deeper and deeper he sunk into her then began pumping hard. She could hear his pelvis smacking into her ass as his massive cock filled her pussy and hit her deep inside. Papers and magazines were sent flying. She gripped the table as hard as she could to keep her balance.
“That’s right whore. I’m going to fuck the shit out of this pussy until you’re begging for more” he said grabbing hold of Teri’s hair, pulling her head back towards him. Right then she felt the first waves of an orgasm sweep over her.
“OOOH GOD!! YES!! FUCK ME! FUCK ME! FUCK ME!” Wave after wave she came. Over and over again until she thought she couldn’t take it anymore. And then he pulled out. Teri almost had a feeling of disappointment. She was a slut and wanted to be used totally and completely. Without warning the man thrusted his cock into her ass. The initial pain was immense until she relaxed her muscles and accepted her captures will. She wanted this, would do anything he commanded. He spanked her while pumping and pounding her ass. The man’s moans and groans began to grow louder and louder. She thought would fill her ass with his seed soon. She wanted him to fill her ass.
“Turn around!” the man commanded, pulling his rock hard cock out of her ass and now stroking it with his hand. Turning around she realized his intentions and nearly came again. He planned to spray his come on her swollen breasts and hardened nipples. He began sliding his cock in between her massive tits.
“You like that don’t you slut? You want me to come all over these nice tities of yours don’t you?”
“YES! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!” she repeated over and over again. She wanted his come and wanted it bad.
“I’m going to give it to you all right” the man said, his moaning and groaning now coming at a more rapid pace. The rhythmic squirting began, over and over again he squirted his come onto her tits until it was dripping down her chest and running into the crack of her pussy. “Now suck it clean slut!” he said forcing his cock into her mouth once more. Normally she does not swallow and hates the taste of it but she was lost in moment, lost in the slut. She sucked his dick dry, all the while rubbing his come all over her chest.
 
Great workings of a story there, chap. but i have just a few suggestions...first off i just want to say i like your style, i'm into these kinda stories.

first, you should make the wife reluctant at first, and forced to perform. then as things progress she slowly starts liking it.

second, like you said, come up with an ending ;p

third, keep up the good work.
 
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